Aufie Zophy (18 October 1964)

A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards

so romantically piece of written.
tnx for sharing

Yes..I do agree with Ellias..the balloon in your poem is so amazing!

This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife
well done dear

Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors.

so beautiful sir loved your style short and sweet........so good............it is simply elegant in its simplicity

I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write.

I visualize the balloon bursting with a prick, letting out a sea of love for the whole world to bathe in! ! Wonderful imagination! !

A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this-
Wow! would not any wife appreciate this

I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you!