Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,107 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon


I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

I brought this balloon, so blue
all the way, especially for you

So, quick, quick, quick
Give this balloon a prick

let's bathe in its content
a sea of love, to never end


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Aufie Zophy
Bachok

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Here is the sea of love:
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Submitted: Sunday, October 07, 2012
Edited: Friday, June 21, 2013

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A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

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  • Gold Star - 22,957 Points Akhtar Jawad (1/9/2015 8:30:00 AM)

    You reminded me of two lines from an Urdu poet, Jigar Muradabadi- - - -
    Ek lafz-e-muhabbat ka adna yeh fasana hay Simte to dil-e-aashiq phaile to zamana hay
    (It's a short story of the word love, when converges becomes heart of a lover. when diverges becomes an universe. A great poem...................10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 169 Points Sankar Sehanabis (10/24/2014 3:12:00 AM)

    Awesome! A nice romantic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 36 Points Viti Kumaar (9/17/2014 12:11:00 AM)

    Such a cute, lovely poem... :) Wonderfully written! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 38,094 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (9/7/2014 11:40:00 AM)

    awesome so so so sweet Auie sea of love, to never end ..Amen (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 66 Points Francis Wanyiri (5/6/2014 4:16:00 AM)

    awesome piece. I enjoyed. please check out my works too. Thanks (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,543 Points * Sunprincess * (3/22/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    ............beautifully written with lots of loves.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,958 Points Ken E Hall (10/23/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 4 Points Nader Baheri (10/22/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    so romantically piece of written.
    tnx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (10/19/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    Yes..I do agree with Ellias..the balloon in your poem is so amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 159 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (10/17/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife
    well done dear (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,688 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/17/2012 7:12:00 AM)

    Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 104 Points Yash Shinde (10/16/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    so beautiful sir loved your style short and sweet........so good............it is simply elegant in its simplicity (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,841 Points Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,372 Points Valsa George (10/14/2012 11:30:00 PM)

    I visualize the balloon bursting with a prick, letting out a sea of love for the whole world to bathe in! ! Wonderful imagination! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 259 Points Joseph Anderson (10/14/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this-
    Wow! would not any wife appreciate this (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,196 Points Elena Sandu (10/14/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    I love this poem, it's more than a ten! Sweet and very relaxing, soothing! Swimming into a blue sea of love, now, thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,822 Points Smoky Hoss (10/11/2012 1:06:00 PM)

    Such sweet poetic words, wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,268 Points Neela Nath (10/9/2012 7:14:00 AM)

    So nice! A beautiful poem on love.Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,075 Points Unwritten Soul (10/8/2012 2:43:00 PM)

    Inside the ballon
    the crimson feelings swirl
    the love filled inside it,
    let it goes high will never fall
    never less than sky tall
    climb the air toward the end
    and the sea of love will reach it
    but if it explode one day
    we all will never dry again
    showered by the love eternally
    By our red balloon as a serene moon
    ...continuity inspired by Hans_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,685 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (10/7/2012 9:51:00 PM)

    thislu poem is slightly different from your usual write. the blue balloon, the blue sky, the blue oceans and the Hearts pumping fast! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

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