Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 10,691 Points (18 October 1964)

My Mother's Lesson In Empathy - Poem by Aufie Zophy

At the time, I was a five-year old boy
A visit to my aunty, always a joy
My cousin was playing with cars at the back
He just had a new one, the body in black
Orange lines on the side, oh boy, what a toy

Only a few minutes later, it is hard to believe
My cousin was called and he had to leave
This left us alone, that beautiful car, and me
The temptation was great, as great as could be,
I could not resist and became a thieve

Into my pocket, very smoothly it went,
I was delighted, extremely content
When we reached home, I told to my mom
With much pride about what I had done
And that's where contentment would end

My mother, incredibly sweet, incredibly bright
Swallowed her anger but asked in a voice, slightly tight
Please consider for a minute or two
How you would feel if someone did this to you.
Deep in my mind, I considered this plight.

It was easy to see the horrible feeling
I'd caused in my cousin by carelessly stealing
Our next visit, I was allowed to put it silently back
That car, with orange stripes on a body of black
Since then, I ‘ve quit forever the stealing

I don't think that there ever could be
A more brilliant lesson in empathy





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Comments about My Mother's Lesson In Empathy by Aufie Zophy

  • Ratnakar Mandlik (5/7/2016 11:44:00 PM)

    This beautifully conceived poem reasserts the universally accepted truth that mother is indeed the best and the greatest teacher for her child. Congrats for composing such a beautiful poem as also on it's being the Poem of the Day. (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (5/7/2016 2:21:00 PM)

    Glad to have your work today as, poem of the day! Mine was read on the 8th of February this year. Nice dedication for your mother. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul Lyn Paul (5/7/2016 7:26:00 AM)

    Lovely to read again. I believe we can still learn even more when we reflect on our mother's life.
    Thank You (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul Unwritten Soul (5/7/2016 4:40:00 AM)

    I still remember when i was reading this heartfelt tribute to your loving mother few years ago. It was beautiful and again it telling me now how beautiful this lesson and memory is...i just loved it again and again..God bless your mother and you are such a living life for her now...i am sure if she ever knw who you are now she must be proud... and Hans, congrats for this big day celebration, they chose your poem as a highlight and you deserved it. Mother no matter what race nationality religion and custom, mother unites world love. (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (5/7/2016 3:40:00 AM)

    Congratulations for your poem getting selected Poem of the Day.Mother is the first teacher of a child.Mother's love, care, teachings and morality shape a child's character.Thanks for sharing this marvelous poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga Rajnish Manga (5/7/2016 2:27:00 AM)

    More than the beauty of the narrative, it is the profound lesson taught by a mother to her son without inflicting any blow to this young man's dignity. The poet has done a great job. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rahalkab (5/7/2016 12:25:00 AM)

    Your mother taught you a good lesson, Aufie. Congratulations on having this poem selected as poem of the day! (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (1/17/2016 2:46:00 AM)

    Your poem shows honesty of your mother as well as yours.The values we learn from our parents go with us through out our life.Nicely written. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage Jayatissa K. Liyanage (1/11/2016 8:19:00 AM)

    That's what mothers are and should be, irrespective of any difference. Mother is the best as well as first teacher to any being. I salute our mother for being just that. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (11/29/2015 9:19:00 AM)

    Mother's love filled with wisdom teach her loved ones the joy of living happily. Of who I am, I owe it to my mother! (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin Dr.tony Brahmin (8/27/2015 6:42:00 AM)

    My mother, incredibly sweet, incredibly bright
    Swallowed her anger but asked in a voice, slightly tight
    Please consider for a minute or two
    How you would feel if someone did this to you.
    Deep in my mind, I considered this plig these are the most beautiful lines in this poem. and your reacton Mother Mother................ soooooooo lovely (Report) Reply

  • Walterrean Salley (7/9/2015 10:41:00 PM)

    Great poem, well written. Many of us have had a similar experience. Herein lies a moral lesson for all. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt Kelly Kurt (4/23/2015 6:12:00 PM)

    Mothers are often very wise, and yours taught you well. Great poem, Aufie. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Drashi Shah Drashi Shah (10/30/2014 7:37:00 AM)

    Wow.... it is reallly a great poem i must say hats off excellent.... (Report) Reply

  • Sharilynn Reaser Sharilynn Reaser (5/24/2014 9:13:00 PM)

    Oh the wonderful lessons of our dear mothers! My mother too taught me many great lessons! (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 11:02:00 AM)

    Only a few minutes later, it is hard to believe
    My cousin was called and he had to leave
    This left us alone, that beautiful car, and me
    The temptation was great, as great as could be,
    I could not resist and became a thieve (Report) Reply

  • Khairul Ahsan Khairul Ahsan (8/16/2013 12:39:00 PM)

    A nice lesson shared. My tribute to your great mom! (Report) Reply

  • Gleb Zavlanov Gleb Zavlanov (7/20/2013 12:27:00 PM)

    A very nice poem, indeed. Thanks for the write. I invite you to read and comment. (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath Das Neela Nath Das (4/30/2013 9:10:00 PM)

    Your mother is great! She preaches us to be good, and honest since our childhood.A terrific poem on wisdom.Loved. (Report) Reply

  • Dee Corpolongo Dee Corpolongo (1/11/2013 8:12:00 AM)

    This is an incredible poem, and I loved how you showed a great lesson learned
    in a poem. Your mom was a really smart woman, and it is amazing that I also
    learned about stealing in a very similar way, long, long ago. Though it was a
    similar incident but taught to me by a friend....by explaining how I would feel.
    I love this excellent poem! (and reminding me of an important life lesson once learned!) (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 21, 2010

Poem Edited: Wednesday, March 27, 2013


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