Aufie Zophy

Gold Star - 11,544 Points (18 October 1964)

Soothing Sea Sounds - Poem by Aufie Zophy

Soothing, breaking one by one,
Peaceful brushing on the shore
In crescendo and then back down
My soul is asking for much more

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Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea

Comments about Soothing Sea Sounds by Aufie Zophy

  • Walterrean Salley (10/28/2012 3:05:00 AM)

    There is something about the sea that is so mesmerizing. Soothingly, it draws you in. Feels like I’m there. What an experience. Good job. Enjoyed this Hans. (Report) Reply

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  • Elena Sandu Elena Sandu (7/15/2012 8:33:00 PM)

    Another one of your wonderful poem to touch my soul, yes I feel any kind of water songs soothing. But the sea could keep entire me forever. Thank you! (Report) Reply

  • Pari Dharawat (11/19/2011 10:37:00 AM)

    Nice choice of words, glad i read it, beautiful indeed (Report) Reply

  • Patti Masterman (6/23/2011 3:03:00 PM)

    What a lovely gem of a piece. (Report) Reply

  • Miroslava Odalovic Miroslava Odalovic (11/6/2010 2:35:00 PM)

    This is beautiful, splashing lines. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Afzal Shauq (9/6/2010 12:37:00 PM)

    lovely and meaningful write with rich story..liked it very much 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Jenny Gordon (9/5/2010 10:41:00 AM)

    It is so poingant, succinct, and bittersweet. I love it! (Report) Reply

  • steffy samuel (9/2/2010 8:32:00 AM)

    beautifully expressed... (Report) Reply

  • Colin J... Colin J... (7/26/2010 2:46:00 PM)

    Washed away by this...
    Colin J... (Report) Reply

  • Sreekala Sukumaran (6/20/2010 4:20:00 AM)

    Well write small poem and precise... well done loved it.... (Report) Reply

  • Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/15/2010 12:51:00 AM)

    A poem of give and receive..ebb and flow..The return is incomplete.. I loved it! Good one.; D (Report) Reply

  • Gita Ashok Gita Ashok (6/7/2010 8:15:00 AM)

    see, sea, crescendo, soothing, soul
    All these have the sound of 'C' in them. I agree with you in that one can never have too much of the sea.
    Short and precise and to the point. Lovely write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 6, 2010

Poem Edited: Friday, March 29, 2013

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