Soothing Sea Sounds Poem by Aufie Zophy

Soothing Sea Sounds

Rating: 5.0


Soothing, breaking one by one,
Peaceful brushing on the shore
In crescendo and then back down
My soul is asking for much more


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Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea
Sea, sea sea sea sea sea

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
steffy samuel 02 September 2010

beautifully expressed...

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Jenny Gordon 05 September 2010

It is so poingant, succinct, and bittersweet. I love it!

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Afzal Shauq 06 September 2010

lovely and meaningful write with rich story..liked it very much 10/10

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Miroslava Odalovic 06 November 2010

This is beautiful, splashing lines. Thanks for sharing.

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Gita Ashok 07 June 2010

see, sea, crescendo, soothing, soul All these have the sound of 'C' in them. I agree with you in that one can never have too much of the sea. Short and precise and to the point. Lovely write.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 September 2017

My soul is asking for much more Beautiful touch on these poetic lines, thanks Aufie for the sharing. Regards, Subhas

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Walterrean Salley 28 October 2012

There is something about the sea that is so mesmerizing. Soothingly, it draws you in. Feels like I’m there. What an experience. Good job. Enjoyed this Hans.

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Elena Sandu 15 July 2012

Another one of your wonderful poem to touch my soul, yes I feel any kind of water songs soothing. But the sea could keep entire me forever. Thank you!

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Pari Dharawat 19 November 2011

Nice choice of words, glad i read it, beautiful indeed

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Patti Masterman 23 June 2011

What a lovely gem of a piece.

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