Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,356 Points (18 October 1964)

Comments about Aufie Zophy

  • Rookie Amir Mohammad Islami Chalandar (6/6/2014 7:11:00 AM)

    excellent poems. you are great in explaining your feels. i invite you to read my poem

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  • Rookie - 4 Points Chukwuma Ndububa (7/25/2013 9:49:00 PM)

    t's the brevity of your stance [Facetiae] each time, your Diallage, the Energia, that secures my goodwill - that's the Charisma my heuristics inevitably support... Well, your goal of rhetoric isn't to persuade others accept your personal view as correct 'cause all are invited; but teaching [that an idea is reasonable or acceptable only until it is sufficiently
    challenged] which is one of the three goals of rhetoric. I want that term used by the Italian Humanists of the Renaissance to describe the source of passions [the practical wisdom] in your human mind; the Issues of definition, fact and quality. You switch poetic forms to expressive purposes each time, that I'm persuaded by the power of the presentation. Sometimes, wishing to put myself in your character to strengthen my exigence vividly if I can. My 'bases' use what I've known about you as a Logical proof for my 'backing'. This is an artistic proofs of a Hypsos you're making. This is a Techne! The Universal/ Rhetorical audience identifies your Gens [I can't describe you enough for recognition.] Kudos, the Noble. Kudos, Sir! You shall come polyphonic, O Stentor! What more can I not say! *my written greetings*

  • Rookie - 0 Points Laura Hope (4/18/2013 4:17:00 AM)

    I love the metaphors. The realizations. The deep thinking. The light thinking. The bouncy feel to some. The dredging feel to others. Great work. I like it! :)

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (3/7/2013 10:05:00 AM)

    A poet with a gentle temperament
    his words heavier than gold
    a sparkling light that guides
    that travel further than the cosmos
    knowledge weighted with wisdom
    it's source devine
    may his pen keep writing
    inked from the sufi heart of..Aufie Zophy!

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (9/8/2012 6:44:00 AM)

    Every life is like a channel of a river, we met at some point and we flow to the same destination, and at some part of my life given i met a nice and honest friend like you, Hans. I always see you as a person who have high spirit to talk about life, love and people...In your poems you love to add some humanity and kindness, to inculcate the positiveness, much effort on add all flavor in your work originally. Above all i would like to thank to u to give me support and a nice company always, you tried to convince me when i need some words, even though i am stubborn but your words relief some pain, soothe me a smile my friend, as pure as you wrote in poetry your heart really nice as we all can see, wish you all the best in writing and life, keep sharing your love to everyone with your talent, and because of it God loves us_Unwritten Soul

  • Silver Star - 3,031 Points Wahab Abdul (3/18/2012 4:31:00 AM)

    here stands at a distance my friend with a grand hand to write beautiful piece of poems with a brand style called zophy style, and his mind and heart full of ideas, thoughts, no one thinks early, so here goes the credit to him to be an unique and original thinker poet, more ever he is busy always to help and encourage others, i wish him a successful life in the field of poetry.

  • Rookie - 4 Points Lawrence H (1/11/2012 6:58:00 PM)

    A wise person who know how to compose poem beautifully and creatively.Keep it up. Kudos to you. Thank you for reading my poems.

  • Rookie Lenore Lee (11/22/2011 5:20:00 PM)

    A kind and wise person who is undoubtedly a true poet; who writes the words not from the mind but from the heart. Beauty and inspiration is in all the poetry that comes from this artist's loving hand.

  • Veteran Poet - 3,840 Points Dr. A.celestine Raj Manohar Md (8/3/2011 7:38:00 PM)

    a good beginning Aufie. Your road to poesy appears like the one least travelled.
    wish you the very best,
    Dr John Celes

  • Veteran Poet - 1,755 Points Kee Thampi (5/4/2011 12:38:00 AM)

    Aufie is a poetess makes streaks on our mind
    Feel good bush new visions
    Let’s feed our brain with all the best
    Positive thoughts, lofty aims, a loving chest
    Let’s focus on God’s way, forget the rest
    Search daily for some goodness in the news
    And sure your brain, just like the goose
    A golden egg a day it will produce

Wandering cloud

Relaxing in a lazy chair
Casuarina branches, painted on an ever blue sky
A breeze of traveling fresh air
A wondrous white cloud wanders by

Where it will go I am clueless
before long, all again is blueness
I feel a bit lost without
my wandering white wondrous cloud

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