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(18 October 1964)

Y..... The Balloon

I went to the sea of love, this noon
I took it and put it in a blue balloon

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A small poem dedicated to my lovely wife

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  • * Sunprincess * (3/22/2014 8:55:00 PM)

    ............beautifully written with lots of loves..

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  • Ken E Hall (10/23/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    A perfect way to end in a sea of love transported in a blue balloon fairy tale ending for true love...regards

  • Nader Baheri (10/22/2012 10:45:00 AM)

    so romantically piece of written.
    tnx for sharing

  • Eindaray Kyaw (10/19/2012 4:22:00 AM)

    Yes..I do agree with Ellias..the balloon in your poem is so amazing!

  • Ellias Anderson (10/17/2012 8:41:00 AM)

    This balloon must be a perfect experiment. and it shows that how kind and sweet you are to your wife
    well done dear

  • S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/17/2012 7:12:00 AM)

    Wow super cool poem with love burstin balloon! Enjoyd soo much. I hope u read my other cments. Thanx 4 yors.

  • Yash Shinde (10/16/2012 9:23:00 AM)

    so beautiful sir loved your style short and is simply elegant in its simplicity

  • Ramesh Rai (10/16/2012 8:50:00 AM)

    I agree with you sea of love has no end that you have been able to pick up. master write.

  • Valsa George (10/14/2012 11:30:00 PM)

    I visualize the balloon bursting with a prick, letting out a sea of love for the whole world to bathe in! ! Wonderful imagination! !

  • Joseph Anderson (10/14/2012 3:42:00 PM)

    A great metaphor for love-simplisticly beautiful and I love your brevity in creating this-
    Wow! would not any wife appreciate this

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