Seed To A Latino Dancer (The Nurturing Of Young One In The Womb) Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Seed To A Latino Dancer (The Nurturing Of Young One In The Womb)

Rating: 4.7


Gold melts from the God's tomb
Only to be nurtured in mom's womb

Hola! a small world is in ecstasy
Everything turns as realistic fantasy
Stone hearted becomes flabby
When news spreads in the air
There's going to be a baby

Books and videos fear and run
To ponder them is sheer fun
Old views cast a reviving picture
Poor mom listens the lectures
Gulp them all even it's a tincture
Shopping list never cease to grow
Renaissance renaissance cries the home




From a seed to a Latino dancer
Baby enjoys and cherishes a lot
Causes the sadness to drought
He eats, dances and makes merry
For him everything is a fairy
But, she relishes the enamoring pain
Takes all the care
As nothing should go in vain

Two lives fight the fierce battle
The Ordeal gives her trembling jitters
Cast and recast his body's metal
Soon the cries embrace the smile
Never seen pain so labile
Enthralling in his beautiful presence
In a blink he creates new heaven

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Small world = Family...
Poor mom listens the lectures....from other people or from elderly
Gulp them all even it's a tincture... at times u don't wanna listen, but u stil listen
Soon the cries embrace the smile(baby is born)
Cast and recast....the shearing stress which the baby undergoes while coming out of the womb
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Medvedev 31 May 2012

beautiful.. simply beautiful! I have nothing more to say. I am spellbound.

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Captain Cur 31 May 2012

Glad you are back on PM. Wonderful poem of life and birth with a spirited ending.

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Unwritten Soul 31 May 2012

Sharad, this is gooooood one..glad you have something to write again...i completely understand this poem but is that any story behind this write? thanks for inviting me Sharad _Unwritten Soul

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G Nelson 31 May 2012

Beautiful and rejuvenating. This poem was a real pleasure to read.

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Kasia Fedyk 31 May 2012

Exquisite dance of the spirit. So beautiful! Thank you.

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Kewayne Wadley 19 June 2015

Good good poem. What I liked most was how you tackled real life as eloquently as you did here. Giving birth is a beautiful thing. A blessing. A story of truimphant porportion

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Gina Albiek 25 August 2012

soon the cries embrace the smile..... wonderful i really enjoyed reading it especially this sentence :)

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Aman Sa 14 June 2012

Magnificent creation portraying alongside the joy that a baby brings along like a blossoming of crops bring showers of joy to the farmers soul but it has come from the untiring labour in summer and rain of him...The meeting of two thoughts have kept the flow going in a thoughtfull adventure...And as the other poems of yours the innovations in design can never go unnoticed...

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Roong S 13 June 2012

wow..its really a nice poem. Cheers! !

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Rizvana Parveen 13 June 2012

Good Composition....

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