The Expression Of Love Poem by Freespirit Juneja
The Expression Of Love
The very first dropp of rain
Makes my heart go insane
Fragrance of the earth's aroma
Enraptures and fills my body's stoma
Ballet of leaves on songs of winds
Makes my soul dance and sings
Sun's penultimate rays glistening the twilight
Spreading heart's sight far n wide
Rainbow within each dewdrop
Helps appreciating versatility of life's job
If I combine all realms of nature
The only person whom i feature
Whose presence makes me alive
Who propels me to strive
Who makes me fly high and above
O my heart it's u
.....Embrace me with Your love, your love and your love
i like this poem.The line make my heart go insane is cliche and I would change. I would also refrain from abreviations such as n wide when you mean and wide. U when you mean you. Good english makes good poetry.
This is a wonderful poem. You illustrate a beautiful picture. Nice words.
Yes so true, when love speaks the music we here is exquisite and the expression profound. I can feel the oneness in your poem the beauty of life and power of love. Beautiful. love love love! :)
Fine poem. Congratulation. I invite you to read my poem and comment. Yours Gajanan Mishra
Absolutely lovely... I loves this poem... beautiful description of nature... A lovely write :)
I agree with Steven Cooke on that you shouldn't abbreviate words. Other than that this is a mmoving and heartfelt poem that I adore, bravo!
Very moving poem indeed i congratulate you for such writing, , , , , , , , good expression of love good imagination good choice of words excellent poem i like it good luck wth your next poems Guess Who
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/15/2024 7:44:25 AM # 1.0.0.1119
its very sweet i like it