Lets Dance To The Tune Of Lust Poem by Freespirit Juneja

At first I struggled with the phrase 'the things which are must', but, as I read on and began to enjoy the poem and it's message for it's own sake, the strange sentence construction took on a wonderful meaning of it's own. I now would not change it for the world. I will be honest, I rarely read very many poems of those who ask me to, unsolicited, as they tend to be of dubious grammatical value. Also, I never comment unless I feel the poem is worthy of praise - I do not like to criticise for fear of causing offence or dampening the enthusiasm of a budding poet. I really enjoyed this one. Well written

there's lot of rhythm in ur poetry...

nice rhythm, .nice flow

nice flow...........nice poetry

Amazing lines... very well Put down... The Rhymes cover up for even the peculiar syntax.. This is what everyone must learn - to enjoy every minute of their living... Come on Sir! Forget those things which are must - write to the thought of YOUR lust

Lust can be a great driving force if tempered with love

A nice smoothly flowing poem in tune with the title that is strong in its sentiment. Very playful almost mimicking child like manners. Good work

Really, We know it but like to deny. Very true.Flow? Awesome!

There it is, a real human, not just the idea of being one

Awesome. Lust is often seen as disgusting and is considered a sin. honestly, ppl should try being lusty for a day. Adding it as one of my favorite poems. :)