Return to the sky my friend, my white dove...free your thoughts to fly with the clouds, may sun also smiling reading your poems again and the dark universe turn blue sky...Sharad you have a good idea in writing good poem, must keep writing it when you free, no matter if you want post or no, be free as your spirit so you will release all burden without anchoring you down...! Be happy my fella_Unwritten Soul
You requested me to read Smile of love, expression of love. I very much like them, that you know what love actually is. Beautiful illustration of an emotion that lives purely in the spirit. Edit spelling. As we all need to. But your expression is just what it needs to be, your love and to convey to us that perfect gift from god. Please keep writing.
good work, if i were you i would dig my nails into my writing, you have allot of good writing, get into it a little more.
I wish I could be a kite
Sky looks an angel in orange gown Birds enchant beautiful sounds Clouds run to be sky's crown Winds blowing swiftly Making themselves proud Imbibed in rainbow's colors All shining bright Aiming for new heights I wish I could be a kite