Noreen Carden

Veteran Poet - 1,981 Points (16/12/50 / Mayo)

Life A Journey - Poem by Noreen Carden

I am born.
My own clean sheet.
My road in life is incomplete.
I start my journey baby steps
Alternate routes to right and left.
Wayward steps lead me astray.
My parents, warned, worried, prayed.

My journeys changed now i'm full grown.
My steps are totally my own.
I learn each time i veer away.
Each lesson marks me in some way.
My scars i hide, my fair sides out.
I walk and learn what life is about.

Now i'm in my sunset years.
I've learned my lessons have no fear
I made mistakes along the way.
Each time my conscience made me pay.
Advice to youth if they allow.
Life is precious live well now.


Poet's Notes about The Poem

A poem i wrote after spending the day taking care of one of my grandchildren and wondering what life holds for him

Comments about Life A Journey by Noreen Carden

  • Gold Star - 22,884 Points Kim Barney (12/1/2014 1:45:00 PM)

    This poem is going on my Favorite Poems list! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 14,052 Points Daniel Brick (5/29/2014 9:22:00 PM)

    This poem came out of genuine experience and its truthfulness is obvious in every line. And there's not a trace of sentimentality which spoils much lyric poetry of memory to my mind. There is a double track of genuine experience
    the poem embodies: first, your memories of your life, and second, your meditation on the future while babysitting a grandchild. Memory and Projection, Past and Future - This is how we conquer Time. Wait, that's too aggressive a statement. This is not a poem of We Humans vs. Cruel Time, like Shakespeare's sonnets, nor is it fixated in a past we cannot recover. The title should have informed me: Life A Journey. You are at a way station on this journey, assessing how you lived the journey and wondering how the little one will live it. Janus-like you are looking backward and forward, without regret or fear. It took me a while to work my way to expressing in words what your poem had already impressed on my feelings. Your poem shows me why I value Lyric Poetry so highly! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,758 Points Amitava Sur (1/5/2014 4:25:00 PM)

    A nice elaboration of the life's passage...... loved it.
    You can read my Up to you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 773 Points Mike Barrett (1/3/2014 10:42:00 AM)

    Hi Noreen, I love what you've captured here. To me, live is an eternal voyage in which we grow awareness, knowingness and a lifetime is but a chapter in that eternal voyage. Best wishes to you and yours over 2014. Cheers! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,337 Points Bri Edwards (12/30/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    I walk and learn what life, s about.
    I've learned my lesson, s have no fears.

    could you, noreen, please explain the form of the contractions in the above lines? one i would have
    considered a typo; two i consider something i'm not sure of. are you teasing me? ? ? you are! OOPS!
    my error....the second one would not be a contraction, but, instead, a plural noun form. right?

    speaking of mistakes....i guess every honest person admits to a mistake now and then. some things in my life which other people would call mistakes, however, i would term misjudgements due to lack of experience and/or knowledge............like my marriages!
    it is so easy to SAY live well now and sometimes so DIFFICULT to do. though i've made some mistakes and misjudgements in my life, i still consider that i have lived well....esp. compared to many people.
    thanks for sharing. :) bri (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 358 Points Gary H (11/26/2013 5:45:00 PM)

    : -) good stuff, that's for true. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,830 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (11/21/2013 10:51:00 PM)

    Yeah conscience does make us pay! An aweinspiring perceptive poem, splendid rhymin too. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 883 Points Mary Forrester (11/19/2013 7:03:00 PM)

    Lovely poem Noreen, enjoyed the read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 310 Points John Brown (11/11/2013 7:25:00 AM)

    A very well written poem Noreen, which I enjoyed. I've never heard the term 'fair sides out' before, is it an Irish one? (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,969 Points Clarence Prince (11/8/2013 10:58:00 AM)

    Blessed are all those parents who warned, worried and prayed for their children; this is a really nice poem! Well done, Noreen! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,969 Points Clarence Prince (11/8/2013 10:57:00 AM)

    Blessed are all those parents who warned, worried and prayed for their children; this is a really nice poem! Well done, Noreen! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,802 Points Khairul Ahsan (10/29/2013 7:22:00 AM)

    It was such a pleasure to read this poem of wisdom!
    A wonderful poem with an appropriate title. Life's journey seen, traversed and told well. The last stanza is the best, the last two lines priceless!
    The note is good too. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,199 Points David Wood (10/19/2013 5:23:00 AM)

    Very true words, we all benefit from hindsight. Live life with a kind and gentle heart. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (10/17/2013 6:13:00 PM)

    an excellent poem on life's journey. and oh the lessons we learn along the way. enjoyed this one (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,395 Points Smoky Hoss (10/16/2013 3:11:00 PM)

    All that I can say towards this very fine poem is: Amen! So well stated, in such a wise way. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 953 Points Yasmeen Khan (10/12/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    Life is a journey and many lessons we learn during the whole course. It's a nice poem with a good message to whom who are still at the outset of their journey. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,068 Points Kanav Justa (10/9/2013 2:33:00 PM)

    Very mature write... felt good after reading it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 40,789 Points Roseann Shawiak (10/6/2013 3:01:00 AM)

    I often wonder what life will hold for my grandchildren in their futures. Every moment of life is precious, more so now that I'm also in my senior years. Your poem says what I know to be true in my own life. Love this poem, it's so beautifully stated, the way you show the path to maturity by stating the past. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,277 Points Patricia Grantham (9/29/2013 10:20:00 PM)

    Yes life is a journey and we travel its many winding roads.
    We don't always know what's around the curbs we can only
    hope for the best. Live and learn. Nice write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,945 Points Valsa George (9/29/2013 1:45:00 AM)

    When a person who has learned lessons through years of experience give out such great advice, it has lot of credibility and authenticity! Enjoyed this lovely poem! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 25, 2013

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 5, 2014


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