Bri Edwards

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100th Birthday [Missed By 'Mom'] ...... [SHORT; my mom; death; serious but NOT sad]


Well Mom missed this day by almost nine years.
At ninety-one(?) we escorted her from this “veil of tears”.
But no tears I had the June day she passed.
Her will was NOT to live just in order to “last”.

She’d actually tried to end her life three years before,
but by bad timing and stomach-pumping she missed Death’s Door.
Then again she found herself in a hospital, ailing, in 2005 (?) .
My sister and I pushed a “morphine drip” till she was no longer alive.

Rest In Peace, dear Mom. [December 30,1913-June 20(?) ,2005(?) ]

(December 30,2013)

Submitted: Friday, January 10, 2014
Edited: Saturday, January 11, 2014

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

i could have checked the dates with my sister. though she is a few years older than i, she is more sentimental and probably would remember better. and just because i am not so sentimental, don't think i didn't love my mom. i'd have to beat you up if you said that!
interestingly enough, i lied a bit. i did shed some tears that day, BUT not for my mom's death. later in the day i watched Robin Williams star in the movie Bicentennial Man, and i cried at the dying scene at the ending when...well i won't spoil the ending for you. bri :)

Comments about this poem (100th Birthday [Missed By 'Mom'] ...... [SHORT; my mom; death; serious but NOT sad] by Bri Edwards )

  • Silver Star - 7,915 Points Daniel Brick (4/20/2014 10:47:00 AM)

    The 4th line of your eulogy is the essential truth: HER WILL WAS NOT TO LIVE JUST TO LAST. She acted through that WILL when she attempted to take her life. What courage she displayed! You and your sister can be proud to have had such a parent. Shedding tears is cathartic, they can help us cope with grief. But they're not necessary, and sometimes our grief is too deep for the surface display of tears. Remember Hamlet's assertion about his father's death: I HAVE THAT WITHIN WHICH PASSETH SHOW, and be at peace with yourself. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,094 Points Khairul Ahsan (1/22/2014 7:09:00 AM)

    The poem commemorates the passing away of your mom, the greatest personal loss.
    Though,
    'Her will was NOT to live just in order to “last”.' -yet her journey to eternity must have left the family in grief.
    My condolences.
    May she rest in peace! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,236 Points Noreen Carden (1/13/2014 6:36:00 PM)

    Bri i am glad your mum is at peace.Its the hardest thing in the world losing your mother. You obviously loved her very much sometimes letting someone go is the best gift you can give. Lovely tribute from you. Well done
    I give it a ten (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,456 Points * Sunprincess * (1/11/2014 9:35:00 PM)

    .......thanks for writing this special tribute for your mom...moms are very special...enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,404 Points Douglas Scotney (1/10/2014 5:49:00 PM)

    My mom's comes up in 2220, and dad's in 2015. That recent movie, 'The Railway Man', elicits a tear as well, Bri (Report) Reply

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