Bri Edwards

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Comments about Bri Edwards

  • Valsa George Valsa George (1/23/2016 2:52:00 AM)

    What has happened to Bri Edwards. There is no news of him.......! He said he had some problems with his eyes. But is it so serious as to keep him from poem hunter for so long, I wonder! He is sorely missed........!

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  • Valsa George Valsa George (6/30/2015 11:04:00 PM)

    Bri is perhaps the most vibrant presence now on poem hunter. His humorous writings stand apart. I don't think any other poet here would venture to handle themes the way he does. Also I wonder if any one else is capable of writing in the same style. Sometimes his poems tend to be a little bawdy. Still there is a lot of wisdom in his humour. His comments on others' poems are lessons in Semantics, grammar and spelling. No mistake escapes his x-ray eyes! However his corrective lessons make us a little more cautious. I wish this 'young man' lots of luck and a fruitful poetic career!

  • Albert Price Albert Price (6/22/2015 10:45:00 AM)

    I apologize for taking two years to get around to reading your comment on When Nature Resounds. But your comment caught my interest and made me try out your suggestions- but not the one about the Shapely Damsel in the Floral Pattern Dress, she stays! Thanks.

  • Mj Lemon (5/26/2015 6:50:00 PM)

    Wisdom through humour....thanks so much for the epic, the great, the awesome poetry.

  • Elena Plotkin (12/30/2014 1:36:00 PM)

    Dear Bri,

    Hope you have a happy and healthy New Year! Hope Christmas brought you cheer!
    Don't forget to kiss and feed the reindeer.

    All the best,
    Your PH friend Elena Plotkin

  • Vivek Mishra Vivek Mishra (7/1/2014 2:38:00 PM)

    Wisdom and smiles, hand in hand, lovin' it :)

  • Nika Mcguin Nika Mcguin (2/24/2014 3:50:00 PM)

    One of the funniest poets I've ever read! I always look forward to his poems to brighten up my day.

    ~Nika

  • Janet Stewart (12/1/2013 6:24:00 PM)

    Bri thank you for your comments.

  • Keith Fowler (9/23/2013 2:23:00 AM)

    Bri thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my poem it was much appreciated
    and fun.

    frendall

  • Shahzia Batool Shahzia Batool (9/15/2013 6:07:00 AM)

    My Vote of Thanks!

    Dear Bri Edwards,

    I feel honored that you gave your precious time for evaluating My Scattered Thoughts series, I really treasure your time and substantial contribution according to which I'll edit my poems, and it is something I cannot reciprocate... or express my gratitude...There are many things we ignore simply or do not focus on punctuation and Grammar, and call it just a language barrier. Today I received your critique on Scattered Thoughts i, (and no.X already discussed) ...and I am enlightened about every point you discussed there. Your presence on the site is of substantial value for all of us...

    thank you so much...

    regards,
    Shahzia

Best Poem of Bri Edwards

My English Sucks ….. [english ('poor') : Almost Medium Length; Education And Life; Ph- Inspired]

When I were schooled english wernt my thing.
My scores in English lurning no bells done ring.
Yea I grajaded but ain't english smart ….no lie!
Come end a school year the teach said 'By Bri.'

Was same in bilogy, math, jografy all that stuff.
I done did my best and guess my best were enough.
I did done grate at ball games and in trak run the mile.
I was a THREEletter man and made them girls smile.

I got payed for pumpin gas an turned 18 served my Nation.
For 'Bravry Under Fire' in the NAM I were town sensation.
Back home, all tired, I done gone back to the ...

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Purple....[humor; Short]

What can I write about purple, the color?
Over that above question I shall mull …. or
just make some stuff up you might just believe.
Let's see what Bri has up his sleeve.

Purple was the seventh color discovered by man.
It's the most often used color in a Chinese fan.
When someone acts silly, we say they are 'acting purple'.
The only word it rhymes with is the archaic word snurple.

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