Aufie Zophy

Bronze Star - 2,337 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/ A fable


A man was blind
‘cause he kept his eyes closed all the time
He had not seen any light
He did not believe in light

A man was deaf
‘cause he kept his ears closed all the time
He had not heard any sound
He did not believe in sound

Another man
Kept his mind closed all the time
He had not received any wisdom
He did not believe in wisdom

Another man
Kept his heart closed all the time
He had not felt love
He did not believe in love

Another man
Was not aware of the beauty of his soul
He had not experienced God
He did not believe in God

And then it happened that

The blind man opened his eyes
The deaf man opened his ears
The other men opened their minds and hearts
Connected to their beautiful souls
And all became believers
And the world leaped to harmony

Submitted: Thursday, May 30, 2013
Edited: Friday, May 31, 2013

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Deep inside I believe that this little fable one day will become the truth. Let us all open up.

Comments about this poem (Y/ A fable by Aufie Zophy )

  • Gold Star - 19,004 Points Valsa George (6/25/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Open our windows and let light stream in, so that we will be able to look at life from a higher perspective and see things in greater radiance! Enjoyed this lovely write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (6/11/2013 11:04:00 PM)

    Wow, so insightful. Yes, its the self 'induced' blindness, deafness.......which disturbs our own soul and others also. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/6/2013 4:31:00 PM)

    That's the bomb! great structure. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,175 Points Valerie Dohren (6/4/2013 12:29:00 PM)

    Simply put, but very true - we all need to have open minds and hearts. Good write Aufie. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 534 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (6/4/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    A very inspirational poem to see every one living in harmony! BEAUTIFUL! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (6/3/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    When the doors opened...the flood of goodness will flow in...beautiful write poet! A 10. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Unwritten Soul (6/1/2013 6:44:00 AM)

    Amazing and the idea of senses and inner-senses met by metaphorical arrangement...great work Hans! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (6/1/2013 6:15:00 AM)

    I agree with you. Some people need a wake up call. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,037 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/1/2013 12:53:00 AM)

    Wow i add dis to my fav, so eloquent and inspirational, yes we have to open our mind to see God and d light. Bravo poet. (Report) Reply

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