Ekaterina Polischuk

Rookie - 26 Points (20.08.1987)

To My Brother...


You are alone right now and feel the pain in heart
Because of broken hopes and false pretense.
Your face is smiling but you crying start
And try to understand of fortune dance.

You`re listening to my words but they `re a sound
That gives to you the way to chose your life…
We can just die and lye under the ground
To loose my husband or to loose your wife.

We can just look into the dark and boring side,
We can forever hate the other world
And understand we need the God`s insight
Because of our hearts are dead and cold.

We lost the love, but should just go ahead,
Believe in future, do the happiness,
Because the time with other we have had
Is our treasure and of life progress...

We should look forward other fearless dreams,
And understand we`ll meet another love…
They`ll bring the light in our lives, it means
We`ll have a jewel and the soul trove.

Submitted: Thursday, March 15, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, September 19, 2012

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  • Rookie Full Moon (9/19/2012 7:15:00 AM)

    towards simplicities through complexities! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (3/28/2012 3:26:00 PM)

    A nice personal poem of love and guidance for your brother at his time of grief. He must be stronger for your care. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 97 Points Macharia Kanyari (3/25/2012 8:51:00 AM)

    I hope your brother read this... He should be proud (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,187 Points Walterrean Salley (3/18/2012 11:06:00 PM)

    Strong bond. Advice that only a sister could give. How wonderful, Ekaterina. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (3/18/2012 1:31:00 PM)

    Great poem sister, your brother should be proud of you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (3/18/2012 9:45:00 AM)

    Very sensitive poem, it touched my heart and hope it can walk straight in the hearts people. Yes sometimes people will leave us in love but need to look beyond sorrow and wait for someone else who can match our thoughts. A well written poem by Kate! Truesome and awesome! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,993 Points Wahab Abdul (3/17/2012 11:14:00 PM)

    ''We can just die and lye under the ground
    If I lose husband or you lose your wife.''

    when i read this poem i become soft...and fears engulfed , as the bad things are waiting for me, i should more courageous to live in this world................................ (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,344 Points Hans Vr (3/17/2012 10:32:00 AM)

    What a wonderful sister. Your brother is bery lucky to have you as his sister! (Report) Reply

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