(20.08.1987)

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A Picture of My Soul

A picture of my soul is inside,
It has a lot of colors, melody.
Sometimes I am too happy or just tired,
I write by heart the love and tragedy.

A picture of my soul is the light,
I always search it in my sleepy thought.
It is so mild, eternal, sometimes tight,
I walk the road Holy Angels taught.

I sleep in dreams about happy choice
And go through time with spirit in my mind.
My poetry is just a silent voice,
I hope you could the truth in lines find.

Submitted: Wednesday, March 21, 2012


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  • Howard Johnson (9/14/2012 9:15:00 AM)

    A powerful line: I walked the road holy Angels have taught thanks for sharing.

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  • Hans Vr (3/30/2012 7:22:00 AM)

    This is truly a great poem, Ekaterina. The soul, with all its colours and yet soft its light. You picture the soul in all its aspects and all its grandeur. It is quiet, yet if we want to tune in to it, it is always ready toguide us to the greatest of heights. Excellent thought provoking poem

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  • Adam Mckim (3/28/2012 12:08:00 PM)

    Very nice write. I like how said it has colors and melody. Not only do you give a visual but also give it music.

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  • Harindhar Reddy (3/28/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    Kate, It is amazing! Your poem ran like waters of a rill and it is simple yet the truth is inspiring, I like the ideas you conveyed in the poem about your self and brought the narrator in you to the surface.....

    Bingo! As usual you have a surprising pack of poems! Keep Growing and keep writing! with best wishes

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  • Harindhar Reddy (3/28/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    Kate, It is amazing! Your poem ran like waters of a rill and it is simple yet the truth is inspiring, I like the ideas you conveyed in the poem about your self and brought the narrator in you to the surface.....

    Bingo! As usual you have a surprising pack of poems! Keep Growing and keep writing! with best wishes

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  • Sagar Shelar (3/23/2012 1:23:00 PM)

    Really nice poem. Your poem is like beautiful painting on canvas.

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  • Wahab Abdul (3/22/2012 7:54:00 AM)

    ''A picture of my soul is the light, '' what a line! double paradoxical, two paradoxes make a beautiful sense which molded in a poem to make it an exquisite piece of poetry.

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  • Sajna Kailas (3/22/2012 2:15:00 AM)

    wow, great write! ! ! ! words coming from a true heart, sincere feelings and honest write.

    really it is a picture of your soul.loved it! ! ! ! keep it up. God bless you dear friend! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Shadow Girl (3/22/2012 12:17:00 AM)

    Beautiful, soothing words...flowed well......melancholical yet hopeful / happy
    -SG
    x

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