Ekaterina Polischuk

Rookie - 26 Points (20.08.1987)

Real Women


Reality is nothing when you die,
So, why we always cry about time?
All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
They often speak to our nature prime.

All women like gold stars in mystic sky,
They are an admiration, people`s heart,
They were described in poems poets by,
They look like clear crystals in the mart.

But time is gone, the idols pass away,
The world needs not the mothers with a child…
Your eyes just look for doll who couldn`t say
Not for a woman whose worlds view is mild.

Remember women with sweet rose cheeks,
With gentle lips and often kind hand.
They were forever praised by each of Greeks.
Today we have another beauty mand…

But if you look for trust and real love,
Don`t find your heart among the paper walls,
Those pictures put the money you above,
Like leis the truth in darkness always stoles.

But look around, real angels live
In women who just go along the street.
They`ll be by you, in you will they believe
And give the love that you forever need.

Submitted: Tuesday, March 06, 2012

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  • Rookie - 222 Points Adam Mckim (3/28/2012 12:14:00 PM)

    I love this. They way you described women as angels, perfect. I had an angel once. sadly she left but oh was she a beautiful angel and just as you described too. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,595 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2012 7:28:00 PM)

    They`ll be by you, in you will they believe
    And give the love that you forever need... that is real essence of life.. welcome dear poetess. so kind of you.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 172 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (3/18/2012 1:36:00 PM)

    Superb poem Ekaterina, absolutely wonderful...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kasandra Kerfont (3/10/2012 4:50:00 PM)

    Very beautiful concept, and rather truthful, I think. I like this. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Pheko Motaung (3/10/2012 9:10:00 AM)

    A marvelous poem! Thank you very much. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (3/9/2012 2:27:00 AM)

    Yes life of has been changed and women and men has been transformed. There is truth in your words that physical beauty is not only treasure but let us measure the hearts of the Ladies........ Yet now ladies altered they only need wealth of the man but not his health... A sordid saga of life which is strife......

    But look around, real angels live
    In women who just go along the street.

    Nevertheless, Well said Kate, I honor your words! Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gordon Tseng (3/8/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    But if you look for trust and real love,
    Don`t find your heart among the paper walls,

    --That's right! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eric Cockrell (3/7/2012 6:49:00 PM)

    each woman, a universe in herself! good one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Whisperkwane Lamb (3/7/2012 6:18:00 PM)

    well said young person, women are the angel of the universe and to see and reead that make it a fact...women are a roar from deep within man's core...thanks for sharing your mind...I loved it from within me...and I smiled to myself... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (3/7/2012 4:47:00 PM)

    I do not have to vote here. It is clear, you are a wonderful poet and you do well with the language also. OK English is not my native either, so I can see the beauty of your work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Binish Cd (3/7/2012 8:43:00 AM)

    Really a nice imagination and the expression with a rhyme......... a very good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 857 Points 1. Floy Dy Ra Floyd Floydson (3/6/2012 4:09:00 PM)

    Great poem. I like rhythm and rhyme and how you describe the Real Woman and the angels at the end...I like this kind of woman...bravo :))) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,949 Points Wahab Abdul (3/6/2012 12:45:00 PM)

    Reality is nothing when you die,
    So, why we always cry about time?
    All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
    They often speak to our nature prime.


    AN EXQUISITE PIECE OF POETRY WITH A STYLE, THE STRUCTURES OF THE VERSES AND THE PACE OF THINKING ARE PRAISE WORTHY INDEED.PLEASE CARRY ON AND LIVE UP WITH ALL THOSE, YOU SPRANG OUT AS A WONDER POETESS, A LOT OF PRAISE TO THEE AND YOUR POETIC QUALITY. (Report) Reply

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