Treasure Island

Ekaterina Polischuk

(20.08.1987)

Real Women


Reality is nothing when you die,
So, why we always cry about time?
All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
They often speak to our nature prime.

All women like gold stars in mystic sky,
They are an admiration, people`s heart,
They were described in poems poets by,
They look like clear crystals in the mart.

But time is gone, the idols pass away,
The world needs not the mothers with a child…
Your eyes just look for doll who couldn`t say
Not for a woman whose worlds view is mild.

Remember women with sweet rose cheeks,
With gentle lips and often kind hand.
They were forever praised by each of Greeks.
Today we have another beauty mand…

But if you look for trust and real love,
Don`t find your heart among the paper walls,
Those pictures put the money you above,
Like leis the truth in darkness always stoles.

But look around, real angels live
In women who just go along the street.
They`ll be by you, in you will they believe
And give the love that you forever need.

Submitted: Tuesday, March 06, 2012

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  • Adam Mckim (3/28/2012 12:14:00 PM)

    I love this. They way you described women as angels, perfect. I had an angel once. sadly she left but oh was she a beautiful angel and just as you described too. Great write. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/18/2012 7:28:00 PM)

    They`ll be by you, in you will they believe
    And give the love that you forever need... that is real essence of life.. welcome dear poetess. so kind of you.... (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (3/9/2012 2:27:00 AM)

    Yes life of has been changed and women and men has been transformed. There is truth in your words that physical beauty is not only treasure but let us measure the hearts of the Ladies........ Yet now ladies altered they only need wealth of the man but not his health... A sordid saga of life which is strife......

    But look around, real angels live
    In women who just go along the street.

    Nevertheless, Well said Kate, I honor your words! Kudos! (Report) Reply

  • Gordon Tseng (3/8/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    But if you look for trust and real love,
    Don`t find your heart among the paper walls,

    --That's right! (Report) Reply

  • Whisperkwane Lamb (3/7/2012 6:18:00 PM)

    well said young person, women are the angel of the universe and to see and reead that make it a fact...women are a roar from deep within man's core...thanks for sharing your mind...I loved it from within me...and I smiled to myself... (Report) Reply

  • Lasoaphia Quxazs (3/7/2012 4:47:00 PM)

    I do not have to vote here. It is clear, you are a wonderful poet and you do well with the language also. OK English is not my native either, so I can see the beauty of your work. (Report) Reply

  • Binish Cd (3/7/2012 8:43:00 AM)

    Really a nice imagination and the expression with a rhyme......... a very good poem. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (3/6/2012 12:45:00 PM)

    Reality is nothing when you die,
    So, why we always cry about time?
    All thoughts, dreams in our mind fly,
    They often speak to our nature prime.


    AN EXQUISITE PIECE OF POETRY WITH A STYLE, THE STRUCTURES OF THE VERSES AND THE PACE OF THINKING ARE PRAISE WORTHY INDEED.PLEASE CARRY ON AND LIVE UP WITH ALL THOSE, YOU SPRANG OUT AS A WONDER POETESS, A LOT OF PRAISE TO THEE AND YOUR POETIC QUALITY. (Report) Reply

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