As I read an article about how we humans age,
I suddenly spied a comma crawling slowly ‘cross the page.
I knew it couldn't be a comma, but it WAS so small
that if it were much smaller, I'd NOT see it at all.
I'm sure it was an insect or some related critter.
I wonder if, on that page, it did leave some insect litter.
I tried to pick out the legs it'd have if an insect it truly were,
but my eyes, not being microscopes, could only see a moving blur.
What good is a leg if you can't see it? OK, ok, it'll still help you get around. This is an excellent poem, Bri. It gives me an idea for one I'm working on now. A 10, no doubt.
Fun! Was it a paper page or electronic? I bet it was really a spy camera disguised as a comma.
short and so much intresting, , , , it was like a complete entertainer poem, , , , , love it
Deep and thought provoking! I felt in that mood when I wrote my just posted poem titled: Just Passing Through A few powerful words that said it all! 10+++ Thank you for sharing dear friend and keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-NYC
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Probably a paper mite - nice little poem, quite novel.