Sister's Hair Scare … [inspired By S.Zaynub Kamoonpuri's Poem "Cccc My Real-Life Indian Rapunzel And Hairdo"; Humor; Long Hair (Dis) Advantages; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards

Sister's Hair Scare … [inspired By S.Zaynub Kamoonpuri's Poem "Cccc My Real-Life Indian Rapunzel And Hairdo"; Humor; Long Hair (Dis) Advantages; Short]

Rating: 5.0


Sis walked down ….the country lane,
dragging her long hair, with great strain.
After all, it weighed …at least fifty pounds.

Along came a bold eagle (low-flying) .
It grabbed her hair, vainly trying …
to lift her, as Sis ….made horrible sounds.

But try as the huge hunting bird might,
it could NOT take ….(her) hair in flight,
so it went back to ….its hunting rounds.

(June 11, 2016)

Saturday, June 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: birds,hair,humor,sisters
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
see my extended-title and 's.' 's poem; hers is really quite nice and longer. if you are 'into' hair and hairdos, you should like this.

bri :)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 26 August 2016

I have heard many tales of hair But this story sounds like hot air Not surprising coming from you For the laugh then a ten is due

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Annette Aitken 23 June 2016

Ha ha thanks for the chuckle enjoyed that one. Annette.

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Susan Williams 18 June 2016

This was a really hairy poem- -eagles apparently of the bald variety are swooping down to make off with hair. Yikes.

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