Shall I Compare Akhtar To A Ball Of String? ... [a Tribute To My Ph Friend, Akhtar Jawad; Short] Poem by Bri Edwards
Shall I Compare Akhtar To A Ball Of String? ... [a Tribute To My Ph Friend, Akhtar Jawad; Short]
If I compare Akhtar to a mere ball of string....,
what fine visions would it, to me, then bring?
A well-rounded fellow to be sure...; it's true!
He's one who gives and gives to me and you...,
and to his relatives and neighbors I am sure.
His 'string' (of accomplishments) I'll bet is pure!
(October 12,2015)
Yes, Akhtarji is a string coiled round and if straightened will touch the moon, as Loke has observed! Bri is teacher to him...... so is to me!
Awesome tribute to Janab. Akhtar...........Loved it.....nicely penned.
Bri Edwards is my teacher. I have learnt a lot from him. English is not my language, he always pointed out my errors of English and i always welcomed his suggestions. So many times I edited and corrected my lines as suggested by this great teacher. I shall ever remain grateful to Bri Edwards. Thanks, Dear Teacher, a gratitude from a Teacher, for a student, is beauty, and a thing of beauty is a joy for ever.
He looks like a slim distinguished gentleman, his 'string' if joined will reach the moon and back. Thank you sir.
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Akhtar has a gift for writing with sensuality, expression and cleverly chosen words