Bri Edwards' Heaven On Earth...[ Ice Cream, Birds, Peace, And Harmony; Fantasy, Most Likely; Wishful Thinking; Filling Some Spare Time ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards' Heaven On Earth...[ Ice Cream, Birds, Peace, And Harmony; Fantasy, Most Likely; Wishful Thinking; Filling Some Spare Time ]

Rating: 4.7


When I've pushed past my 70th year, I guess I'm allowed to dream,
of what 'Paradise' would be for me. Let's start with Ice cream.

1 - Ice cream, on a stick, in a cone or bowl, hard or soft,
…of nearly any flavor, could send my spirit aloft.

I've never bathed in ice cream; maybe I'd try it.
If you think this is too silly, why don't you just be quiet!


2 - Birds! Not the kind found in our chicken coop,
…nor the ones which, upon my head, will poop.

Since childhood, birds, those found ‘in the wild',
have brought me ‘joy'.
But I DID also enjoy (till a cat got it) a parakeet as a young boy.


3 - Peace, among all people, including every single one of us.
Why is it so many end up ‘making war' instead?
Why all the fuss?

Why indeed? ! Perhaps only a ‘god' can answer that.
Perhaps all of humans' gods should sit down and have a chat!


4 - Harmony. I've run into a definition difference; by "harmony" I did mean "peace",
not just a lack of ‘war', but day-to-day living together without strife. Let negatives cease!

Unfortunately a lack of "harmony" among people …
may only be ‘fixed' by gods, ….like ones sometimes ‘connected' to a steeple.

And, unfortunately(?) , I don't believe in such gods or God,
…for which [ if "God" DOES exist ], to Hell, I may ‘get the nod'.


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So, it looks as though no Heaven on Earth will be mine.
Perhaps YOU will be luckier, and Heaven on Earth will be thine.


bri edwards

December 16th,2021

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Well, i DID fill some of my spare time, and perhaps YOURS? ;)
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kim Barney 16 December 2021

Yes, indeed, on the ice cream, Bri! I love ice cream! Also, wild birds are fun to watch, and your ideas about peace and harmony are great!

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Jayne Davies 17 December 2021

Very yourthank you👏🏻

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Jayne Davies 17 December 2021

Funny! An enjoyable read. Thank you x

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Bri Edwards 16 December 2021

Way to go, Bri. ;) bri best wishes to all, and......to all a good night.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 December 2021

A wonderful poem. Witty and entertaining. As for me, there is Heaven on Earth if there is peace and harmony.

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 28 December 2021

Let me know when you are going to bathe in the ice cream! I will join you!

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Linda Bella Wassermeister 28 December 2021

Ice Cream... I dream and scheme and scream for ice cream! What more could anyone want?

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Beach Girl 17 December 2021

This site sent my review off before I was finished. i wanted to add I gave it 5 stars.

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Beach Girl 17 December 2021

Bri, If there's anything better than ice cream, bird watching and world peace I don't know what is.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 17 December 2021

I wish for those things too Bravo!

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