Bri Edwards Is A ' Monster '......[ Personal; Wife; Etcetera ] Poem by Bri Edwards

Bri Edwards Is A ' Monster '......[ Personal; Wife; Etcetera ]

Rating: 5.0


Wives 1 & 3 I made 'miserable', #2 made ME almost crazy.
Wife 4 calls me 'Monster', and, sometimes, she adds: 'lazy'.
Why then, when I proposed marriage, were each 'receptive'?
Along with my charm, good looks & virility I must be deceptive! ! !

'#4' also calls me 'autistic' (I don't mind) , and recently 'a fool',
but it hurts a bit to have to sit, facing a corner, me atop a stool.
Maybe it's all 'payback' for women's suffering over all the ages?
Or, for all my 'husband-mistakes/sins', it's my thus-earned 'wages'?


Oh, well! !

(April 11,2023)

bri

:)

Tuesday, April 11, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: women,sin,marriage,men
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Oh! Did I mention the dunce hat?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Cowboy Ron Williams 13 April 2023

I can see you on your stool, trying to not look like a fool. We only get one life. Who needs more than one wife? Wives make us better, I bet. With practice, you'll be perfect yet!

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Bri Edwards 14 April 2023

Well done, good and faithful poet-friend. bri : ) 5 stars for your comment.

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Bharati Nayak 16 April 2023

I agree to what Kim Barney said in his comment.

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Aqua Flower 14 April 2023

Sometimesany attention is better than being ignored or feeling like you don't exist.some attention is better then no attention.

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2023

As for your comment on my marriages/'Monster' poem, I highly agree: SOMETIMES getting (almost) any attention can be better than getting none.

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Kim Barney 14 April 2023

Somehow, in my mind, I cannot fit 'Bri Edwards' and 'monster' into the same sentence.

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2023

TRY HARDER, Kim. : )

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Kim Barney 14 April 2023

Amen to what the Cowboy said, Well said, Cowboy! I couldn't have said it better.

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Bri Edwards 15 April 2023

well, I might have 'said it better'! ha! MAYBE not.

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Bri Edwards 14 April 2023

DO YOU HAVE ANY GRANDAUGHTERS AVAILABLE? THEY NEEDN'T COMMIT TO 'TOO MANY' YEARS. : ))) bri

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