adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

An Ode Of River Rhyme - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

The mountains
that paint Terra's face
too arrogant to share diction
The sea
that blanketed by rainbow
so haughty to translated languages
Only river so faithful
sow the word seeds
pick the script verses
then harvest it into a love poem
that inscribed on the cloud body
entrusted to the horizon soul
till the wind deliver it
To you..
my magnificent longing

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Comments about An Ode Of River Rhyme by adheez van der beanthz

  • Rookie - 219 Points Prasanna Kumari (4/2/2014 9:57:00 PM)

    good poem with unique expression bringing unique thought.... (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 8,690 Points Hazel Durham (3/28/2014 5:59:00 PM)

    Stunning imagery and so beautifully expressed! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,889 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (3/27/2014 3:07:00 AM)

    Wow wind dispersal of poetry, thanx to dear ol poemhunter to convey great poems like this. Imaginative. Tc. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 69 Points Jemima Rivas (3/18/2014 7:42:00 AM)

    very smooth it glides love it :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 260 Points Rose Lu (2/18/2014 9:37:00 PM)

    Good poem. I like it (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 730 Points Maya Hanson (2/11/2014 9:19:00 PM)

    Pretty and thought provoking :) i like it!
    ~mye3 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,897 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (2/7/2014 7:08:00 AM)

    Very lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 306 Points Maria Goodison (1/17/2014 12:43:00 AM)

    Enjoyed reading this one well done keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Far Lapenna (1/11/2014 2:30:00 PM)

    Beautiful, beautiful poetry, I love the amount of emotion you express in this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Emily Angel (1/5/2014 7:59:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,525 Points Louis Borgo (1/4/2014 8:10:00 PM)

    First I like the title and how you put your culture in the poem. This information to a foreign like my self that would found interesting found as side of what im used to great job. And the last thing no one or two poets are alike I like the language of the poem the culture build in as well as a wonderful title. keep written my friend.10! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 45 Points Mohammed Al-balushi (12/24/2013 10:49:00 PM)

    full of love and emotion, well write (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,453 Points Jesus James Llorico (12/24/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Truly a lovely write, full of emotions and imagery.
    Enjoyed reading this verse. So beautiful.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,396 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/23/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Only river so faithful
    sow the word seeds
    pick the script verses
    then harvest it into a love poem.......

    though the look is restricted by window, yet, it illustrates the purposeful view to show the reader a part of life, in other parts river carries many things....many...many.... Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,308 Points Patricia Grantham (12/23/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Very nicely written with good details. Nature expressed in such a
    lovely way. Just like love flowing from the rivers and bursting with
    such beauty. Enjoyed. Keep on penning with power. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Erin Stevens (12/22/2013 4:40:00 PM)

    This is so sweet and lovely! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,897 Points Savita Tyagi (12/22/2013 8:09:00 AM)

    Beautiful, poetic tribute to rivers life blood for humans. Enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (12/22/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    Everything that is in nature do inspire us to write and It is wish of every poet to create through nature. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,690 Points Hazel Durham (12/22/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    Nature so beautifully captured in it's unique essence to deliver your love in such a magnificent way! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,637 Points Ramesh T A (12/22/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    Whole Nature seems to be at your service to deliver your love longing to your lady! Wonderful, my dear fellow! You are lucky indeed to have a nice service for your love! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 24, 2013


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