adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 34 Points (27 May 1980)

An Ode of River Rhyme


The mountains
that paint Terra's face
too arrogant to share diction
The sea
that blanketed by rainbow
so haughty to translated languages
Only river so faithful
sow the word seeds
pick the script verses
then harvest it into a love poem
that inscribed on the cloud body
entrusted to the horizon soul
till the wind deliver it
To you..
my magnificent longing

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Submitted: Saturday, December 21, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, December 24, 2013

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  • Rookie - 18 Points Far Lapenna (1/11/2014 2:30:00 PM)

    Beautiful, beautiful poetry, I love the amount of emotion you express in this poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 319 Points Louis Borgo (1/4/2014 8:10:00 PM)

    First I like the title and how you put your culture in the poem. This information to a foreign like my self that would found interesting found as side of what im used to great job. And the last thing no one or two poets are alike I like the language of the poem the culture build in as well as a wonderful title. keep written my friend.10! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,430 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/23/2013 11:24:00 PM)

    Only river so faithful
    sow the word seeds
    pick the script verses
    then harvest it into a love poem.......

    though the look is restricted by window, yet, it illustrates the purposeful view to show the reader a part of life, in other parts river carries many things....many...many.... Well written. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,273 Points Patricia Grantham (12/23/2013 6:54:00 AM)

    Very nicely written with good details. Nature expressed in such a
    lovely way. Just like love flowing from the rivers and bursting with
    such beauty. Enjoyed. Keep on penning with power. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 501 Points Tribhawan Kaul (12/22/2013 7:51:00 AM)

    Everything that is in nature do inspire us to write and It is wish of every poet to create through nature. Beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 2,880 Points Hazel Durham (12/22/2013 7:16:00 AM)

    Nature so beautifully captured in it's unique essence to deliver your love in such a magnificent way! (Report) Reply

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