adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 42 Points (27 May 1980)

An Ancient Mystery - Poem by adheez van der beanthz

An incomplete script
more evocative
more challenging
and more interesting
rather than a whole book

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

life is incomplete manuscript
it is what makes life challenging and exciting

Comments about An Ancient Mystery by adheez van der beanthz

  • Freshman - 676 Points Yasmeen Khan (8/14/2013 10:42:00 AM)

    Mysterious and enigmatic hold a charm of it; s own. Thoughts in a nutshell. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 667 Points Chandra Thiagarajan (8/12/2013 10:04:00 AM)

    Well said, Life is an incomplete manuscript and it is the mystery! Nice poem! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,269 Points Unwritten Soul (8/12/2013 6:45:00 AM)

    Because mystery is always fascinating! and story always behind it, that make it more
    interesting_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,916 Points Savita Tyagi (8/11/2013 8:18:00 PM)

    Excellent write! Short yet full of depth. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,653 Points Patricia Grantham (8/11/2013 4:36:00 PM)

    Just like reading a good book and finding out at the last moment
    that some of the pages had been torn out. Putting pieces together
    like a jigsaw puzzle and getting the whole picture. Good write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,917 Points Hazel Durham (8/11/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    The future is always tantalizing with it's untold tale yet to unfold! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 178 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (8/11/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    This is a brief but certainly very meaningful thread! It is likely the poet to recall a time of an incomplete manuscript that he might have written, and, for some good reason, it keeps resonating in his mind and heart as a milestone.
    May the poet enjoy many lifetime stories ahead to be written/shared with us, dedicated readers.
    Best regards, Adheez (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 499 Points Rajendran Muthiah (8/11/2013 8:36:00 AM)

    Yes, it is an incomplete script. The truth told in nutshell. Brevity is the soul of expression. Best Wishes. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,424 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (8/11/2013 7:33:00 AM)

    intriguing
    mysterious
    please enlighten me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (8/7/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    Awesome and said so eloquently. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 831 Points Ramesh T A (8/7/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    Increasing curiosity to know full script! If developed further into a complete work it will be still more interesting to read! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (8/5/2013 6:15:00 AM)

    There is truth here, sometimes a chapter is more than enough. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 418 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (8/4/2013 10:52:00 PM)

    brief but nice, I like this (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Lucifera Santez (8/3/2013 2:28:00 AM)

    challenging and mysterious.
    a very intriguing write.
    :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 15,269 Points Ramesh Rai (8/2/2013 10:49:00 AM)

    beautiful write. liked your write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 53 Points Amitava Mazumdar (7/31/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    a very small and precise effort. good one. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 558 Points Tribhawan Kaul (7/31/2013 9:29:00 AM)

    A thoughtful poem. Incompleteness itself poses lot of challenges. Beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 432 Points Danny Draper (7/31/2013 8:55:00 AM)

    Similarly a wreck is more interesting than a seaworthy ship. Incomplete and intriguing. A fine thought in this succinct piece. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,228 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/30/2013 12:35:00 PM)

    Yes everybody loves a mystery that is open to interpretation. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,860 Points Dave Walker (7/30/2013 12:31:00 PM)

    It hands to the mystery when one has to search for the
    full meaning. A great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 30, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 31, 2013


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