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adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 34 Points (27 May 1980)

A Gun, A Man and Rights for New Brand


a man with rights
a gun at his side
no reason to fight
act as a cowboy in the past

a gun, a man, and a wisdom
fire anyone, random
a car, a child, even a wall
rush to greet the deathly call

are we in war?
why blood flooding on my floor?
while the silent Parliament
still hold on in his old brand

a nation with its laws
all the world see your show
the rights of the gun
a player has some fun

until when this will end?
how many life have to be sent?
might you finally understand
and make a better amendment

a man who isn't blind
a pen as a gun
please give us a good sign
for the future of our sons

earthzcity,150613

Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 12, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

theme of this poem is taken from the issue of gun ownership in keeping with the U.S. amandemedent that now a hot issue in connection with the abuse of that rights and the number of victims who have fallen

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  • Silver Star - 9,377 Points Roseann Shawiak (8/17/2013 8:45:00 PM)

    You make some good points in your poem. The old adage - the pen is mightier than the sword is true especially in poetry. Although I'm a gun owner, learned how to shoot as a girl scout and was taught all the safety rules. Love target practice and have never shot anyone. Taught my sons how to shoot also. Guns don't kill people - people kill people. A gun can't shoot anyone unless a person pulls the trigger. Am an advocate for gun rights and stand behind the NRA completely. Have control over my weapons, and sons never took any of them unless we were with them. Because they were taught how to shoot and be safe they were never curious about them and never showed them off to anyone. It's all about education, ethics and morals. I respect your opinion and agree to disagree. Thank you for allowing me to read your poetry. RoseAnn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Niken Kusuma Wardani (8/15/2013 11:12:00 AM)

    hi, this really a good poem, i don't think you write in bahasa and translate all in english, it won't hv good rhyme. i like this poem, the lines are beautiful with deep meaning. You have suceed capture the theme, overall poem indeed lovely. not many ppl realize pen can killed more ppl than gun... thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Alookh (matin) (8/14/2013 7:27:00 AM)

    yeah! right! i really prefer these kinds of poems...this poem shows your care about human being...good luck adheez! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kevin Halls (8/10/2013 4:00:00 PM)

    Hi Adheez. You asked me to read your poems and this one caught my eye.
    Firstly well done in writing in your own Language and then into English which is no easy feat, as our language is not the easiest to do! Obviously you slip up here and there but the meaning behind the poem is clear enough.
    A gun in the wrong hands can cause violence and destruction, as we see and hear about daily around the world.Once again well done and keep on writing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Louis Cecile (8/2/2013 4:16:00 AM)

    A powerful statement and particularly the first verse that emphasizes how foolish the amendment is in this age. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 164 Points Rajendran Muthiah (8/1/2013 4:31:00 AM)

    In stead of wielding the pen, the children now use the gun. The future of these children will be a fun. The U.N.O
    will open its eyes when the head of a nation is shot down. When the heads of the poor fall on earth, it will be engaged in the search of the truth. This gun-culture will be spreading soon to other parts of the world. Your poem is a timely warning to the sensible world. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,053 Points Elena Sandu (7/30/2013 5:36:00 PM)

    Yes, a pen as a gun, indeed only one word could touch millions at a time. All conflicts should be solved with the power of words. One day humanity will get rid of all of those ugly things, could bring nothing but pain, one day we shall become aware. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nader Baheri (7/29/2013 3:22:00 AM)

    i believe definitely that you have hold a gun in your hand too.but with lot of differences.your gun is definitely your pen and the idea you are sharing with your pen.and this gun is lot more useful than those guns.
    merci~nb (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,470 Points Savita Tyagi (7/28/2013 6:02:00 PM)

    Wonderful write. We must create awareness with whatever means we have about the abuse of gun laws and problems created by these laws. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 134 Points Danny Draper (7/28/2013 8:11:00 AM)

    The issues of guns in the US is complex and intransigent as so many vested interests like it just that way. Good write on a complex issue with the same frustration of so many victims and their families. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,501 Points Ramesh Rai (7/26/2013 11:26:00 PM)

    a powerful write. a man with gun is ofcourse a stupid one. the gun can not stop the natural disaster which is the grt attack on human kind.then what is the use of gun to use on the innocent. grnd write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (7/26/2013 8:27:00 AM)

    Very nice write. the guns, the kings of the humanity killing, they should be stopped to not take any other lives anymore. love this write pal
    keep up writing about humanity. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 203 Points Nasarudheen Parameswaran (7/26/2013 4:47:00 AM)

    There is a saying in bible that one who uses sword to kill, will get end his life by a sword. so is the case of guns.
    More than the first few stanzas the last ones are better in rhythm and rhyme. Please read poems of Robert Frost more. It will help to come up. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,391 Points Kevin Patrick (7/25/2013 11:35:00 PM)

    The Tuscon shooting, the Columbus killings, The Colorado theater, Sandy Hook, inner city violence all of this is caused because of an outdated constitutional amendment that's the legal equivalent wisdom teeth a feature not needed. Im not American so I cannot understand the obsession with owning a firearms, all I see is the trail of violence that's led from it. If you measure freedom with owning a gun, your only free to pick your grave. Good write (Report) Reply

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