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adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 34 Points (27 May 1980)

A Form of Sea Way


sea​​, makes me become a wanderer
like the wind
crossed the doubt and the hope
then lay for a seconds
to enjoy the silence

sea​​, makes me become a fighter
like a rock
crashing, day and night
still silent, of course keep survive
though full of wounds and holes

sea​​, makes me become a hermit
like the wave
came and repeated
there's always room
there's always less

sea​​, where I become a man
met the meaning of creation
so, I can guide the other me

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Submitted: Sunday, June 09, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, March 25, 2014

Topic of this poem: life


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  • Veteran Poet - 3,403 Points Savita Tyagi (3/25/2014 8:14:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem with excellent imagery. Vast sea connects us with our other half! So apt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 131 Points Beach Girl (8/14/2013 10:03:00 AM)

    Such a beautiful poem about the sea! Watching the waves is like communicating with a living thing. It tells us so much about ourselves and inspires us to become more than we are. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 8,822 Points Heather Wilkins (8/3/2013 6:01:00 PM)

    a good poem about the sea. sea, where I became a man met the meaning of creation so I can guide the other me. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,239 Points Patricia Grantham (7/25/2013 9:44:00 AM)

    The sea can either be a place of serenity with the calming effect of the
    water that flows and on the other hand it can be a terrible force to be reckoned
    with when the wind stirs up the waves and lashes it against the rocks. So is it
    like the emotions of mankind. Sometimes calm and at times contrary. I have
    two poems that coincides with yours An Angry Sea and Emotions. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 219 Points David Wood (6/11/2013 1:27:00 PM)

    Restless as the sea which is untamed yet orderly with ebbs and flows. A nice poem (Report) Reply

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