A Form Of Sea Way Poem by adheez van der beanthz

A Form Of Sea Way

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sea​​, makes me become a wanderer
like the wind
crossed the doubt and the hope
then lay for a seconds
to enjoy the silence

sea​​, makes me become a fighter
like a rock
crashing, day and night
still silent, of course keep survive
though full of wounds and holes

sea​​, makes me become a hermit
like the wave
came and repeated
there's always room
there's always less

sea​​, where I become a man
met the meaning of creation
so, I can guide the other me

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leorne Adile 30 July 2013

this one I like... and I've never been to the sea before.

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Heather Wilkins 03 August 2013

a good poem about the sea. sea, where I became a man met the meaning of creation so I can guide the other me.

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Beach Girl 14 August 2013

Such a beautiful poem about the sea! Watching the waves is like communicating with a living thing. It tells us so much about ourselves and inspires us to become more than we are.

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David Wood 11 June 2013

Restless as the sea which is untamed yet orderly with ebbs and flows. A nice poem

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Owain Glyn 12 June 2013

Excellent imagery, the sea is in a constant state of flux, as are we.

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Shania K. Younce 25 May 2014

You know I was just thinking about the sea when I came across your poem. Very good poem. Bien!

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 29 March 2014

nature a great teacher indeed, be with and then you be...lovely wonderful thanks

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Shania K. Younce 28 March 2014

A very lovely poem. I like it a lot. Bien!

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Savita Tyagi 25 March 2014

A very beautiful poem with excellent imagery. Vast sea connects us with our other half! So apt.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 26 August 2013

This is most beautiful - you've perfected the imagery

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