adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 43 Points (27 May 1980)

Beloved Mothers


God creates magmas
Eternal flames
That carved Terra’s face

God creates springs
That gather in the ocean
Despite take a long tiring journey

God creates rainbow and auroras
Jewelry of the skies
Where beauty always live

Then God summarize it
Present a breath of life
Endue a piece of soul
And entrust a form of mandate

To the most glorious creature
To the real angel in the world
To her..
Beloved mothers

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Submitted: Thursday, August 15, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 16, 2013

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I dedicate this poem to all mothers around the world
They are the real angel that God sent to us

Comments about this poem (Beloved Mothers by adheez van der beanthz )

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (5/21/2014 8:30:00 AM)

    so lovely to touch for every words that utter the silent feature of droplets lines, the lasting voice of eternity lives in your poem on what is a mother....thank you and God bless a 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,360 Points Noreen Carden (12/29/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    A lovely tribute to mothers beautifully written adheez (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/21/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    A nice attribute for mother. You made such a lovely poem indeed. Mother is made from all the best and beautiful things. Blessed all mother in the world. Happy mother day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 189 Points Gary H (12/21/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    My mom would be crying right now, nice work for sure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 250 Points Rajendran Muthiah (10/13/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    The word mother itself brings tears from my eyes. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 7,536 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/17/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    A beautiful description on mothers around the world.. Very well portrayed. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points Danny Draper (9/16/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    A fine dedication to mothers. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (9/13/2013 3:36:00 AM)

    a great style of writing makes this poem, very reflected... an avenue of inner sanctum of freedom to galloping the passion of what is a BEING.... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 605 Points Shahzia Batool (8/28/2013 6:51:00 AM)

    beautifully brought to this culmination...and a perfect dedication to the mothers... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alisha A. (8/27/2013 11:12:00 AM)

    I love this! Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,083 Points Hazel Durham (8/23/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful and original write in tribute to mothers who are the heartbeat of family life! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,849 Points Kevin Patrick (8/19/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    The 8th wonder of the world is a mothers love which transforms a child into a good human being, A fantastic dedication to all mothers, in the eye of creation, they are givers and protectors you reward them with great bounty
    Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/19/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    YES! A very beautiful tribute to mothers! Very good verses! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akshaya Pawasker (8/17/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    such beautiful and vivid images adheez and a fitting tribute to mothers. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Hira Akhtar (8/17/2013 12:52:00 AM)

    beautifully described in words the dignity of mothers! ! ! I loved it
    keep on :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,307 Points Valsa George (8/16/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    A beautiful tribute to mothers Adheez! As a mother, I feel proud and as the daughter of a great mother, I feel awed! ! A lovely write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (8/16/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    a mothers love is enduring and forever. lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,743 Points Sallam Yassin (8/16/2013 3:31:00 PM)

    mothers first mothers second and mothers third
    mothers love is ever/ great song for the mother (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 318 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/16/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    Yes, poet, that is true! ! ! But, we, mothers, slipped sometimes we make a mistakes. Nothing is perfect. But love is always there and helping hands also. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 267 Points David Wood (8/16/2013 5:17:00 AM)

    Nobody can love their children like a mother. A lovely poem. (Report) Reply

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