adheez van der beanthz

Rookie - 43 Points (27 May 1980)

Beloved Mothers Poem by adheez van der beanthz


God creates magmas
Eternal flames
That carved Terra’s face

God creates springs
That gather in the ocean
Despite take a long tiring journey

God creates rainbow and auroras
Jewelry of the skies
Where beauty always live

Then God summarize it
Present a breath of life
Endue a piece of soul
And entrust a form of mandate

To the most glorious creature
To the real angel in the world
To her..
Beloved mothers

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Submitted: Thursday, August 15, 2013
Edited: Friday, August 16, 2013

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I dedicate this poem to all mothers around the world
They are the real angel that God sent to us

Comments about this poem (Beloved Mothers by adheez van der beanthz )

  • Rookie - 215 Points Rose Lu (3/20/2015 10:25:00 PM)

    Thanks God from my deep heart! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (5/21/2014 8:30:00 AM)

    so lovely to touch for every words that utter the silent feature of droplets lines, the lasting voice of eternity lives in your poem on what is a mother....thank you and God bless a 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,591 Points Noreen Carden (12/29/2013 8:31:00 AM)

    A lovely tribute to mothers beautifully written adheez (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 55 Points Niken Kusuma Wardani (12/21/2013 11:12:00 PM)

    A nice attribute for mother. You made such a lovely poem indeed. Mother is made from all the best and beautiful things. Blessed all mother in the world. Happy mother day (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 189 Points Gary H (12/21/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    My mom would be crying right now, nice work for sure. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 290 Points Rajendran Muthiah (10/13/2013 11:00:00 PM)

    The word mother itself brings tears from my eyes. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,548 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/17/2013 9:00:00 AM)

    A beautiful description on mothers around the world.. Very well portrayed. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points Danny Draper (9/16/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    A fine dedication to mothers. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 791 Points Antonio Liao (9/13/2013 3:36:00 AM)

    a great style of writing makes this poem, very reflected... an avenue of inner sanctum of freedom to galloping the passion of what is a BEING.... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 710 Points Shahzia Batool (8/28/2013 6:51:00 AM)

    beautifully brought to this culmination...and a perfect dedication to the mothers... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Alisha A. (8/27/2013 11:12:00 AM)

    I love this! Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,928 Points Hazel Durham (8/23/2013 12:13:00 PM)

    Such a beautiful and original write in tribute to mothers who are the heartbeat of family life! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,153 Points Kevin Patrick (8/19/2013 10:11:00 PM)

    The 8th wonder of the world is a mothers love which transforms a child into a good human being, A fantastic dedication to all mothers, in the eye of creation, they are givers and protectors you reward them with great bounty
    Thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aswath Raman (8/19/2013 6:31:00 AM)

    YES! A very beautiful tribute to mothers! Very good verses! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Akshaya Pawasker (8/17/2013 7:18:00 AM)

    such beautiful and vivid images adheez and a fitting tribute to mothers. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 59 Points Hira Akhtar (8/17/2013 12:52:00 AM)

    beautifully described in words the dignity of mothers! ! ! I loved it
    keep on :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,281 Points Valsa George (8/16/2013 11:29:00 PM)

    A beautiful tribute to mothers Adheez! As a mother, I feel proud and as the daughter of a great mother, I feel awed! ! A lovely write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,730 Points Heather Wilkins (8/16/2013 7:44:00 PM)

    a mothers love is enduring and forever. lovely poem (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,804 Points Sallam Yassin (8/16/2013 3:31:00 PM)

    mothers first mothers second and mothers third
    mothers love is ever/ great song for the mother (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 320 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/16/2013 10:00:00 AM)

    Yes, poet, that is true! ! ! But, we, mothers, slipped sometimes we make a mistakes. Nothing is perfect. But love is always there and helping hands also. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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