Lost Poem by adheez van der beanthz

Lost

Rating: 4.9


Sunk in the misguided of the deep sea
Trapped amongst the darkness wave
Whilst the sun denies the morning
And memories come back, despite had been eaten by flame

Sand bodies sprawling
Feelings heathen more sparkling
Grin of sweat so jealous
Racing, hunting, and raping the longing that ambiguous

Gust of sigh map the wounds
Pink body wallow bloods
Summarized then furled
To the ballads that never enough

The wind negotiate, the fog give applause
Drag the black into the boat
Don't know the directions, no more ray
The rest just sins, the which left only prayer

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sabrina Niday Hansel 17 August 2013

That was very lovely!

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Luciana Isabelle 17 August 2013

wonderfully written..... love it!

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Farah Ilyas 18 August 2013

Theme which u have chosen, its awesome.. magnificent in nature is ur poem especially selection of diction is bombastic.. lovely poem

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Hazel Durham 23 August 2013

Amazing imagery rhat sweeps the reader along on a journey well worth taking! Beautiful write!

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Ellias Anderson Jr. 15 August 2013

Well, this is a lovely write. kind of nice imagination that can happen in reality.

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Marvin Brato 24 September 2013

Great imaginary, describes the realm of what life is made!

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Shahzia Batool 28 August 2013

wonderfully animated abstractions...a lively poem with a fine imagery! ! !

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Poetheart Morgan 27 August 2013

Thinking on your poem like a advice maybe i need be careful with my boat. No darkness no lost in the middle of the sea.

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Queeny Gona 27 August 2013

Beautiful Imagery with wonderful ending. Voted 10+++

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Sally Plumb Plumb 24 August 2013

Portrays anxiety well.

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