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(27 May 1980)

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A Shadow

I am a shadow
that born by the ray
though few that heed

I live in the darkness
even when the ray is lying
I still be there, still faithful

watching for your steps
keeping each your hopes
until you find
the next ray that come

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Submitted: Tuesday, April 16, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 03, 2013


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  • Aftab Alam Khursheed (3/29/2014 9:40:00 PM)

    I am a shadow
    that born by the ray
    though few that heed..true painting thank

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  • The Fallen Leaves Of Mira (1/3/2014 1:04:00 PM)

    very touching poem. It reminds me of myself.. Happy new year my friend :)

  • Gary H (12/29/2013 9:35:00 PM)

    Very nice, like this one quite a lot.

  • Valsa George (12/22/2013 12:49:00 AM)

    A shadow is inseparable! Wherever you go, it will follow you! A shadow can stay only with the light!

    A good write with deeper layers of meaning!

  • Shereen Ramadan (8/15/2013 2:53:00 PM)

    wonderful
    it is simple but it is still has deeper meanings

  • Arnav Gogoi (8/15/2013 11:32:00 AM)

    I like the way you have described the loyalty of our shadow that walks abreast all the time...I still be there, still faithful good use of words to describe the inconspicuous presence of our shadow....nice work

  • Bryan De Poet (8/12/2013 4:35:00 AM)

    nice poem my friend

  • Arabella Picken (8/7/2013 9:12:00 AM)

    Quite like this.
    Good sum-up of a shadow.

  • Sallam Yassin (7/26/2013 5:51:00 PM)

    nice to keep the hope
    til the next ray/ nice one

  • Heather Wilkins (7/25/2013 2:43:00 PM)

    your shadow is a constant companion it is always hanging around. a good write.

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