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(july 27 1994 / California, but move around a lot.)

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A Tear In The Eyes That Care (sad)

Fear!
You have gripped my heart...
You torture me, tear me apart...
What is this pain i feel?
Answer me! tell me this is not real!
How can this happen...
How can this be? !
Why are my hopes taken away from me? !
I doubt, I have to...I must!
How can i put faith in those i cannot trust?

The tests are wrong...WRONG....
They cannot be true...
Why did this happen... what can i do?

With time running low,
and pain running deep,
Please do not give in,
don't embrace sleep!
I have only so much to give...
But the tests are wrong!
You have to live!
The doctor can save you...
I know it has to be true...
They have to save you...
Or i don't know what I would do...

My heart bleeds for you.
I am filled with pain and I am sad.
I will pray to god for you...
Please do not take my dad...
Let the tests be wrong...!

Submitted: Tuesday, January 22, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, January 22, 2013


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My father had a seizure recently and they did all kinds of tests to find out why... They found bubbles.. lots of them.. they are going to attempt brain surgery...but all in all... they say it is just a matter of time.

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  • Heather Wilkins (6/5/2013 1:34:00 PM)

    sorry to hear that about your father. Pray for the best to happen to him. A good read

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