Treasure Island

Dr. Antony Theodore


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If You Die Before Me


If you die before me
I would jump down into your grave
And hug you so innocently
That angels will become jealous.

I shall kiss you
And press your body against me.
I shall shiver in your presence
I shall sweat and dance with you
In the nether world.

We shall dance soft and then wild.
We shall dance together.
As one body.
Dance so long and fine like a poem
Until the Lords of the dark world faint.

Then you will be free and fly away
From me into the world of the heavens
Where angels shall kiss your sacred body
Then you need no space to live and breathe.

Into that world of purity you will go
And I will be here on earth
Dreaming of your joys with
The Heavenly spirits.

Shall I wait
Shall I wait at dusk and dawn
with such desire and passion
To reach you oneday
in your world of happiness.

Submitted: Wednesday, May 19, 2010
Edited: Monday, January 30, 2012

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  • Hardik Vaidya (2/9/2013 1:42:00 AM)

    What a brilliant poem. I championed this philosophy some time ago. But I now think its not for the go. When you cannot meet the eye of infinite, better to see her from the womb of her finite. If she dies before me, I can be reborn, as a seed in her soul to go where no man has ever gone. I loved your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (8/6/2010 11:07:00 AM)

    If u die before me, so u can't mourning for me if i die before you...hahahaha...
    what a lovely spirit u used for this poem! and if u leave before me, i will always pray for you to live blissfully in new mystery world..this poem so good, the music melody now crafted in my mind very well...oh i just compose a new song! hahahaha....thanks for sharing, wonderful and cheerful in dark.. :) 10 (Report) Reply

  • Petra Wigge (6/25/2010 4:09:00 PM)

    Great imagination to free your lady love from hades through dancing and to wait for here on earth until the time comes for you to reach the heavens, , , ,
    who is this lucky girl? (Report) Reply

  • Chaitanya Dorwat (6/20/2010 11:57:00 PM)

    You inspire me a lot.....you just challenged god that you would love your loved one more than god himself does......but you accept her death and let the angels kiss her.........u are a jewel, finest poet I have ever met till today. (Report) Reply

  • Emma_1221@list.ru Adamyan (6/19/2010 1:46:00 PM)

    powerful, brave and with 'whole lotta love'...
    as one my friend used to say 'I can dance with the Devil juz to keep u near'
    a memorable work well done! (Report) Reply

  • Ruth Walters (6/17/2010 11:58:00 AM)

    …..and if

    and if in truth our love’s to be eternal
    until the sun and moon refuse to shine,
    then happiness is ours to own forever
    withstanding all the ravages of time.

    and if we reach the pearly gates of heaven
    and the angels ask me if, perhaps, you’ve sinned,
    I’ll tell them we were sinners both together
    and without you I’d rather not go in.


    kind of on the same theme....your poem and mine....Ruthie (Report) Reply

  • Joseph Karun (5/30/2010 11:13:00 PM)

    Did you love her soooooooo much?
    so expressive of deep love. thank you for sharing this poem..given you 10 (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (5/30/2010 9:05:00 AM)

    A great manifestation of pure love, heart touching poem that is full of imagery and devotion! Excellent! Dr. A.T. keep it up! Love and Peace.... (Report) Reply

  • Anita Trivedi (5/30/2010 6:07:00 AM)

    Wel again a beautiful poem presented by you.......... your imagnation is great........ (Report) Reply

  • Lady Grace (5/30/2010 3:02:00 AM)

    owww.what a sweet promise..

    but if u die before me,
    will you keep me in your heart? ...hope so... (Report) Reply

  • Deepthi Vincent (5/26/2010 1:15:00 PM)

    Hey, I could really sense your True Love in this poem for your beloved. May God Bless your Love.10+++ (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (5/25/2010 3:11:00 PM)

    ...This is a deep lyric poem, Tony...and a very deep love......Thank you for presenting such a wonderful work...Mari (Report) Reply

  • Rudy We (5/25/2010 1:42:00 PM)

    what a fine poem of intense love with lots of imagination! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Dulakshi Wakista (5/20/2010 12:27:00 PM)

    so nice creation...Well expressed..Such a lovely poem with full of intense feelings..Keep on writing...Good piece of work....Well done...
    Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Amrit Rathi (5/20/2010 2:16:00 AM)

    It is very lovely poem with intense feelings so beautifully embedded into it. The passion and emotion overflow all around. I have given you 10/10. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Sreekala Sukumaran (5/20/2010 1:32:00 AM)

    Shall I wait
    Shall I wait at dusk and dawn
    with such desire and passion
    To reach you oneday
    in your world of happiness.

    Great imagination, with good emotion very expressive about your love for her. Knowing she is in heaven so sweet of you to wait for her.. Very touching.. (Report) Reply

  • Tomy Pop (5/19/2010 9:46:00 AM)

    to escape the under world you dance with your lady love. great imagination
    and when she is in heaven you simply wait. very emotional expression of love indeed (Report) Reply

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