yoonoos peerbocus

Rookie - 24 Points (05/08/1941 / Mauritius)

A Hint At What Is Beautiful? - Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Beautiful is the 'thank you'
Wrapped with gratitude,
Offered to peace prone people
Who go out of their way
To nurse shrapnel scalded victims

Amidst napalm drugged air,
Carrying their humanity, quietly
And humbly, in our
Blood stained, greed diseased,
Hate eaten world.

Beautiful is the moment
when sunlit world fades away
And with it mind made mirror
While look inward drawn, sight insight led,
Consciousness expands endlessly.


Comments about A Hint At What Is Beautiful? by yoonoos peerbocus

  • Rookie - 20 Points Cleveland Gibson (9/3/2015 6:43:00 AM)

    It is a good slant on what beauty is about. Good thoughts and descriptions that makes the reader think. I have written war poems in the past and beauty on the battle field is what a wounder soldier see in whoever comes to help him. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 33,815 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (9/2/2015 3:03:00 AM)

    We are so beautiful mind and in deed. A good imagination. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 305 Points Rapunzel P (9/1/2015 11:00:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem exploring real beauty (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 305 Points Rapunzel P (9/1/2015 10:49:00 PM)

    Beautiful piece of work evaluating real beauty within us (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,386 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (7/31/2015 12:10:00 PM)

    Truly, physical beauy is God's creation and the beauty of heart and mind is our creation. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,677 Points Seema Chowdhury (7/22/2015 1:35:00 PM)

    Nicely composed, well said. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points eloida Capuno (6/5/2015 11:53:00 PM)

    Beautiful is your poem🌷 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points eloida Capuno (6/5/2015 11:53:00 PM)

    Beautiful is your poem🌷 (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 659 Points Frank Blacharczyk (5/31/2015 8:21:00 AM)

    A nice definition of what is beautiful. The world of TV says beauty is about 'looks' 'skin deep but this poem says beauty is about the giving and loving heart. A correct definition. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,457 Points Akachukwu Lekwauwa (5/26/2015 1:36:00 AM)

    Beautifullly penned for beauty. I loved it. Please review my poem 'The Allure Of Beauty' thanks (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,689 Points Naida Nepascua Supnet (5/14/2015 4:47:00 AM)

    There a lot of meanings of the word beautiful and....you have shown us some
    and it is well-understood.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,483 Points Louis Borgo (3/5/2015 6:53:00 PM)

    Great verse
    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,
    Then I look at the title A Hint What Is Beautiful seems what you are hinting at is what is handsome. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,030 Points Queeny Gona (9/24/2013 1:34:00 AM)

    Beautiful is this master piece
    With anew definiton of beauty
    Yet forgotten and ignored mostly
    In walk of robotic life of modern
    Hatts off! Hatts off! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ..... W@king Up..... (7/4/2013 11:53:00 PM)

    600 comments? ! I am amazed! Though I am not surprised at that because this is a wonderful poem with so much meaning. It has a lot of work and love put into it.

    -W (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,460 Points Ken E Hall (6/6/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    Beautiful to read and digest again...regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Amanda Laurent (5/27/2013 12:10:00 PM)

    One can find beauty in the most surprising of situations, good or bad. Sometimes all it takes is the recognition of something as simple as a thank you. I love your poem! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Ketan Hukare (1/20/2013 7:26:00 AM)

    You r awesome
    Great write! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 821 Points Matthias Pantaleon (11/6/2012 2:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful is the 'thank you'
    Wrapped with gratitude,
    Offered to peace prone people

    Thank u for adding values to these words.
    Nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Cindirighandi S. (10/2/2012 6:41:00 AM)

    Beautiful is this poem, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (10/1/2012 10:40:00 AM)

    awesome! ! ! really i just love it! beautiflly written! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 21, 2007

Poem Edited: Sunday, February 23, 2014


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