Treasure Island

Freespirit Juneja

(09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

Your smile, the vivid constellation of my cosmos


Sitting on the river's shore
Mesmerized by its beutiful Lure
Ornated by blossoming flowers
Summon the avians from far n far
Just like your smile
Which When I come across
Enchants me in its divine gloss
As it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos

Clouds dance across the sun
Fuel themselves to have fun
Flowerbuds crown from their niche
Enjoying nature's eternal bliss
Just like your Smile
Which forms when your lips applause
And My despairs reach eternal pause
Because it's a vivid constellation of my cosmos

Leaves dangle on the trees
Dancing to the zephyr's keys
Butterflies leap from flower to flower
Carry colors far n far
Just like your smile
When it appears
Love embraces me
And fears disappear
Heart gambols as it widens across
Because it forms the vivid constellation of my cosmos

Staring into the cerulean sky
Feel like making a gigantic cry
Are you left with anyone mr sky
To give a dying try or bid goodbye
No matter whomsoever you compile
You can't outshine my love's smile
Sorry Mr. sky for ur dreaded loss
But my love's smile, only forms the constellation of my cosmos

Submitted: Saturday, March 10, 2012
Edited: Saturday, February 02, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

What do you think this poem is about?



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is about a guy / girl who has fallen in love......
the person is relishing the feeling of being in love....
It highlights that the person who is in a beautiful place on the earth is comparing his/her love's smile to all the natural and beautiful things around him....
His / her love's smile(happiness) is supreme and nothing in the world can match it

Comments about this poem ( Your smile, the vivid constellation of my cosmos by Freespirit Juneja )

Enter the verification code :

  • Unwritten Soul (4/24/2012 11:02:00 AM)

    Maybe when you wrote this you was in love very hard, as the love in writing and lines are really good to read again and again...why i like this poem..because you have something i like there...constellation and cosmos...it match my soul..it's magical to us to see now u use for your nice poem..that really work! _Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Louis Cecile (4/24/2012 3:20:00 AM)

    A well formed poem that flows well and has a good use of language. This is probably your most confident write yet. Good work. (Report) Reply

  • Mary S. (4/23/2012 6:08:00 PM)

    Absolutely wonderful! I like that it isn't angsty but it isn't old, you know? It is gorgeous! Your use of words is awesome! (Report) Reply

  • Jinal Oswal (4/23/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    That's so sweet.... I loved this poem from the title.. all the lines in fact all the words are heartfelt... I loved the last verse.. Wow! ! You can't outshine my love's smile... thats a beautiful, lovely poem indeed... I loved it... Keep ua spirits high :) (Report) Reply

  • Wabi Sabi (4/23/2012 7:06:00 AM)

    woo,
    that was romantic!
    reading this, I feel surrounded by cosmos and nestling (Report) Reply

  • Joshua Zwane (4/23/2012 12:23:00 AM)

    I personaly felt desire to read this poem, because of its title.I think you should consider and labour in your titles as much as you do in the contant of your poems, after all that's where it all starts...love your work, will keep reading! (Report) Reply

  • Lizzie O'neill (4/19/2012 12:30:00 PM)

    This is a wonderful poem, so far the poems i have read tell me you are a magnificent poet (Report) Reply

Read all 27 comments »

PoemHunter.com Updates

New Poems

  1. Being a human, gajanan mishra
  2. Mosquitoes, Rahul Babu
  3. थिरिँ बिरिँ #07, Ronjoy Brahma
  4. The pretty back to school الرجوع الجميل .., MOHAMMAD SKATI
  5. New Year, Patricia Spears Jones
  6. The Theme Is Flight, Patricia Spears Jones
  7. Son Cubano, Patricia Spears Jones
  8. After Many Years (Tanka), Mihaela Pirjol
  9. I live and I, gajanan mishra
  10. Crime & War, Dean Meredith

Poem of the Day

poet Rupert Brooke

If I should die, think only this of me:
That there's some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England. There shall be
In that rich earth a richer dust concealed;
...... Read complete »

   

Trending Poems

  1. 04 Tongues Made Of Glass, Shaun Shane
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  4. If, Rudyard Kipling
  5. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  6. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  7. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  8. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  9. 1914 V: The Soldier, Rupert Brooke
  10. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda

Trending Poets

[Hata Bildir]