Zenith Of Love Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Zenith Of Love

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Zenith of Love

The stir you've created
Love has inflated
Am I dreaming
Watch the light beaming
Feel you're beside me
Oh your love has tied me
My heart is on fire
Burns in your desire
Oh stop teasing me
Just play with me
Bless me with your touch
Oh I need you so much
Listen to your zeal
Which only I can feel
Caress me cuddle me
In your arms huddle me
With music of your fingers
My body is your singer
Adorn me with your lips
Hurt with your nips
Move like a fish
Play as you wish
While on your sail
Leave on me some trails
As we are allying
Our love is flying
Oh as you unveil
I turn more male
Oh the rush of breaths
As I explore more depths
Expressions on your face
Invites in your embrace
More you enwrap me
Only love I can see
The act of being one
We sing in unison
And there you fall
Like Angel from heaven....


I can feel the smiling you
As immersed in you
And we lie together
Giving our love feathers
Freespirit Juneja

Thursday, April 19, 2012
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love..................
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Unwritten Soul 20 April 2012

Feeling so good reading this, just like when you stay in your dream world the fairy tales has creating your own story, and it freely flows and goes as the mind lead you to tell and your heart to ring like a bell..a nice tale written by you..I think it will be better if you can set an imagination from one plot to another spot...Keep on writing as you made it very well again and again! _Unwritten Soul

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wow.. full of love and emotion... i am impressed with the way you express your thoughts... it is an art..

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 April 2012

A romantic piece of work. Thanks for sharing it with us. Great work! E.K.L.

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Guess Who 20 April 2012

Nice poem i congratulate you for writing such meaningful poem......... truly i got attached to your poem until the end nice expression of love very neat carefully written lots of meaning = A Very Good Poem good luck with your next poems Guess Who

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Briana Knight 19 April 2012

Dude, this is so awesome. I can never do what you have done here. I can't mold the word to evade image and still get the point across as you have. Standing novation. Plz read mine, Darkness Sings

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Abby Rose 05 July 2012

simple and beautiful. one of the best i have read in a long time.

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Valerie Dohren 10 June 2012

Lovely and inspired poem.

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Kasia Fedyk 08 June 2012

Beutiful! Freedom in the arms of love! It's a Gem! Thank you so much.

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Samra Haq 02 June 2012

Nice poem of romance.May God bless you.

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Rajendran Muthiah 01 June 2012

Being hurt with nips, you have to wear helmet for some time to conceal the bites. When people ask you, If it is a rat bite/cat-scratch.., what can you say. Live telecast from Juneja immerses the readers in joy. Wonderful.

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