Freespirit Juneja

Rookie - 3 Points (09 Aug 1983 / New Delhi)

Friends (A Tribute To My Friends) - Poem by Freespirit Juneja

Amazing Earthly beings
No they are not divine

Vivify with Intensity
Flout the apathy
I understand your curiosity
End here this mystery
With Innovating new trends
I introduce you my wonderful friends

Love & only love their ardor
Hearts blend and beat louder
Togetherness is their denomination
Hatred dies of its own creation
At times parents, at times teachers
Imbibed with everyone's features
Enriched with verve, innovating new trends
Oh they are my wonderful friends

Enthusiasm beams with pride
Welcome sheer happiness,
Sadness no more its bride
Life wishes to be caressed
Wishes emerge from duress
Create heaven every moment
With their innovating trends
They are just my wonderful friends

Our deeds decide heaven or hell
Only foolish buy & swell
God created one for me
Nesting on the friendship tree
Pranks, teasers, slangs come free
Elation and alliance enrich its beauty
I can even give heaven a miss
To reside in my Friends' eternal bliss

Comments about Friends (A Tribute To My Friends) by Freespirit Juneja

  • * Sunprincess * (10/7/2012 12:10:00 AM)

    Wow! a beautiful tribute to your these lines.. :)
    I can even give heaven a miss
    To reside in my Friends' eternal bliss (Report) Reply

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  • Anita Khelawan Anita Khelawan (6/21/2012 3:25:00 AM)

    ..indeed they are wonderful friends...i love your writing style
    thanx for sharing (: (Report) Reply

  • Constance K Yost (6/11/2012 4:12:00 PM)

    God created one for me, nesting on the friendship tree-this is such a beautiful line! The entire 3rd verse is so
    Outstanding- Deserves 10,10- Constance Yost (Report) Reply

  • Franca Kenneth Franca Kenneth (6/11/2012 8:10:00 AM)

    Outstanding concept. Well penned. (Report) Reply

  • Amena MEHMOOD Amena MEHMOOD (6/3/2012 8:56:00 AM)

    At times parents, at times teachers
    Imbibed with everyone's features
    ... well captured (Report) Reply

  • Samra Haq Samra Haq (6/2/2012 5:24:00 PM)

    Very nice poem.Its really a great honour for your friends to have such a nice friend. Good and enjoyable poem. I want to be your friend too. (Report) Reply

  • Leena Sharma (5/1/2012 12:21:00 AM)

    And sharad one more thing.....
    I thing you won't mind but there's a spelling mistake in the second line of the last paragraph,
    'Only foolish buy it and sell', instead of swell, , i guess....
    sorry if i got you wrong! ! ! !
    forgive me for so much criticization......: ( (Report) Reply

  • Leena Sharma (5/1/2012 12:18:00 AM)

    It's an awesum attempt by you sharad but I think that somewhere your thoughts were lagging behind the vocabulary you used! ! ! ! !
    May be I didn't understand it, the way you tried to explain, well that must be my fault! ! ! 1
    Otherwise, thank you a lot to tell us our importance in your life...
    I'm happy to have you as my friend and you deserve a special place, as you were the first one to comment upon my creations! ! ! ! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Thyris Taylor Thyris Taylor (4/26/2012 7:28:00 AM)

    I enjoyed this poem. It has a different and unexpected take on what a friendship can offer. (Report) Reply

  • Shaurya Singh (4/22/2012 10:30:00 PM)

    splendid deserves 10 plus plus plus (Report) Reply

  • Siyabonga A Nxumalo (4/22/2012 2:52:00 PM)

    Good and enjoyable write Juneja. (Report) Reply

  • Feride Feride Feride Feride (4/21/2012 3:35:00 PM)

    A really good write.... (Report) Reply

  • Sidra Naz (4/21/2012 1:33:00 PM)

    an enjoyable read.. good work... (Report) Reply

  • Sidra Naz (4/21/2012 1:32:00 PM)

    its really good... i just started it and couldnt resist until i finished it... (Report) Reply

  • Michael Williams Michael Williams (4/21/2012 8:46:00 AM)

    This is well written and you rhyme well. I am not the type to bond with people but I find envy in this feeling of love for your friends. (Report) Reply

  • Claudia Krizay Claudia Krizay (4/21/2012 4:49:00 AM)

    This is indeed a wonderful tribute to your friends- love it- thanks for inviting me to read it-
    Many thanks,
    Claudia (Report) Reply

  • Donna Caldwell (4/20/2012 12:04:00 PM)

    Really enjoyed your poem! good write with feeling! (Report) Reply

  • Declan O Reilly (4/20/2012 8:49:00 AM)

    Very good poem Juneja, a truly wonderful tribute to your friends. (Report) Reply

  • Amy Lalala (4/20/2012 4:15:00 AM)

    I liked this one a lot whimsical And meaningful! (Report) Reply

  • Sally Plumb Plumb (4/20/2012 2:40:00 AM)

    I love.... nesting in the friendship tree. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 15, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, February 2, 2013

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