You Come Silently Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

You Come Silently

Rating: 4.4


You melt in my arms
Like fragrance does
In a flower
You breathe into me
Like second does to
Make an hour

You live inside of me
Like a current does
In a stream
You come to live in
Me like into the sleep
Comes a dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kanchan Aneja 29 January 2021

A very well written poem.

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Mark Heathcote 29 January 2021

A very nice heart felt write I much enjoyed it.

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Captain Cur 29 January 2021

A very well written and touching love poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 July 2021

Very touching poem, true impressively worded, thank you for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 July 2021

You live inside of me Like a current does In a stream., ... wonderful conceptualization.Beautiful poem.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2021

Typos: please read as: stream. A wonderful poem! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 January 2021

Like the current of a great stram... wonderful! A brilliant romantic poem...5 stars

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M Asim Nehal 29 January 2021

Nicely penned, they are inseparable.5*

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