Tiku akp


Freedom - Poem by Tiku akp

I can't barter my freedom
Take away the riches with you
Don't display your dollars and pounds
To my countrymen who need freedom too

You can't cut my tongue short
It flexes swift and slip your hand
Winds of freedom would blow one day
Your vile attempts can't change the trend

I dream of my countrymen
Walking down the streets feeling proud
The pangs of hunger and poverty
Is packed and burnt in freedoms shroud

I dream of little children
With glowing faces and charming smiles
Rushing to schools in groups
Dressed in colours with impeccable styles

I dream of the girl child
Eyes bright with vision unbound
She has a dream of a world
Where hate and racism can't be found

She would charm all
With her beauty and sharp mind
I dream of her flying high
In all the fields leaving the men far behind

There would be freedom
To speak, to write, to work and to sing
No one would die of hunger
Peace and harmony every dawn would bring


Comments about Freedom by Tiku akp

  • Silver Star - 3,098 Points Clarence Prince (6/19/2015 8:34:00 AM)

    Yes freedom is good!
    There should always be freedom
    To speak, to write, work and sing!
    Well done, Tiku! (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 700 Points Sreelekha Premjit (6/11/2015 5:37:00 AM)

    I like the vision of freedom as portrayed in your poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 293 Points Suelynn Walters (6/7/2015 7:59:00 AM)

    I Love It! Great Work that says so much. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 17,889 Points Edward Kofi Louis (6/5/2015 3:22:00 PM)

    You can't cut my tongue short. Knowing that, the truth is always the truth. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 218 Points Vian Sabri (6/3/2015 7:36:00 AM)

    Freedom is a unit and one package and every human being deserve it, nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Purnima Manhas (5/27/2015 4:59:00 AM)

    Like the subject... it makes sense in current times too, when we in reality, are enslaved in social taboos, lawlessness and gender bias... I, specifically, liked the paras of freedom for girls.. Of course, it was very well constructed with some great adjectives. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Connie Yost (5/19/2013 7:30:00 AM)

    Ahh yes, the perfect world we all wish for. Lovely. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Your Pusha (11/27/2012 2:49:00 AM)

    Nice flow. Your poem is thought provoking and sad. I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Your Pusha (11/27/2012 2:49:00 AM)

    Nice flow. Your poem is thought provoking and sad. I like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Anita Sehgal (11/20/2012 4:50:00 AM)

    beautiful vision of the world as it should be.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Apphia Garcia (11/20/2012 12:14:00 AM)

    I totally enjoyed this piece good stuff (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,539 Points Marieta Maglas (6/1/2012 11:38:00 AM)

    The last stanza is a real message.Thank you for sharing this well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 352 Points Captain Cur (5/24/2012 7:15:00 PM)

    Beautifully written with great emotional impact.
    Men fight and die to be free then sell it back
    for false material comforts. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 350 Points Shruti Goswami (5/22/2012 12:54:00 AM)

    Its heartening to read something where the girl, the female, has been given her due share of importnace and such high hopes, without any gender bias, makes me like the poem al lthe more..thanks.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (5/8/2012 9:07:00 PM)

    Very honest thought! In this selfish world who cares for others.Liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Brianna Winebarger (4/26/2012 7:01:00 AM)

    Everyone wants freedom. Everyone needs freedom. You incooprated this desire into your poem. Great job. i liked it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 582 Points Rekha Mandagere (4/26/2012 2:15:00 AM)

    Freedom is one of the basic need of man. Great patrotism and love for one's country and countrymen is upheld :) If girls of our country get proper education then the country will be free from poverty. Nice theme. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 203 Points Saniya Galeyeva (4/25/2012 2:00:00 PM)

    Freedom to speak, to write, to work and to sing. And to be yourself. Feeling the sorrows of your people and hoping for the better times. A good poem (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 15, 2012



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