Tiku akp

Please Don'T Leave Me - Poem by Tiku akp

The stars have gone behind the clouds
The moon has lost its sheen
In the thick night I weep like a child
Because I can no more call you mine

The heart has burst like a bubble
Blood has spilled into floor
I have cut my veins into shreds
Because I am not your lover anymore

The throat gets choked and burnt
Mind suffocated as if in a prison
Death stalks me where I go
For I lost your love without a reason

The earth burns below my feet
The sun shines so rude in the sky
I could never understand you
Why to a true love you chose to deny

I will be waiting you other side
Don't think I am heartbroken and weak
My soul won't ever take rest
To your divine love it would forever seek

Comments about Please Don'T Leave Me by Tiku akp

  • Veteran Poet - 1,176 Points Nosheen Irfan (11/2/2015 6:14:00 PM)

    Intensity of love and poignancy of loss cant be expressed better. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,874 Points Bharati Nayak (5/30/2015 8:40:00 PM)

    A lovely write with smooth flow of words and touching the heart. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,292 Points Chinedu Dike (1/14/2015 7:11:00 AM)

    A nice poem well articulated and nicely penned to capture the distress and tragedy of failed love. A beautiful poem indeed. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 159 Points Maia Padua (8/3/2014 8:16:00 AM)

    a write from heart..touching.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bayla Burnett (12/16/2012 12:53:00 PM)

    i have to say i feel as if i wrote this its so straight up :) from the heart :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 163 Points Meena Mustafa (12/2/2012 1:55:00 AM)

    A nice write :) never experienced that kind of love so cant say much lol (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (11/26/2012 6:25:00 AM)

    Love doesn't last long but the pain remains like a wound.Lovely Tiku! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 6 Points Stevie Taite (11/19/2012 11:46:00 PM)

    The pain of lost love echoes in your lines. Easily relatable and I think it is beautifully constructed! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rosi Caswell (8/3/2012 2:06:00 AM)

    A vey powerful poem Tiku. It puts one right in that space! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Roongratt Srimanchantha (7/13/2012 7:59:00 AM)

    Sometimes from pain beautiful poems are written..so is this one! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,187 Points Gajanan Mishra (7/8/2012 12:57:00 PM)

    Very good poem. Symbolic of divine love.

    I invite you to read my poem and comment and rate. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 174 Points Joanna Pavlides (7/7/2012 3:20:00 AM)

    better loved and lost than not loved at all, thus it gives birth to beautiful poems like this one (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,451 Points Neela Nath Das (7/1/2012 4:04:00 AM)

    Nicely woven poem with earnestness for love.In a word beautiful. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points eloida Capuno (6/28/2012 11:29:00 AM)

    Sad but beautiful lamentation. Fine write as usual. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 16, 2012

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