Tiku akp


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  • Silver Star - 3,664 Points Bharati Nayak (6/29/2015 8:04:00 PM)

    The flowers have faces down
    As if counting grasses in the lawn- - The sad demise of a young girl is poignantly depicted in the heart touching lines.Silence cannot rein for ever- The poet says-The silence can't reign for ever
    The garden has to glow in colors again
    Upon those she loved so deep for years
    Her blessing would fall from heaven - - - -Such an excellent poem!

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  • Freshman - 761 Points Leloudia Migdali (6/23/2014 11:36:00 AM)

    I loved it! Like all your other poems.

  • Veteran Poet - 1,237 Points Richard Beevor (5/6/2014 9:52:00 AM)

    excellent poem Tiku,10 out of 10

  • Silver Star - 3,796 Points Wahab Abdul (10/6/2013 1:55:00 AM)

    i have read the poems of you, your poems are fabulous, enjoyed and related with your poems.. i wish you best of luck! aw

Dreamland

Walking down the path across the fields
Whistling a song of olden days
I spotted her winnowing the chaffs
Sitting in the sheds of stacks of hays.

Two curls danced on her cheeks
As her head moved up and down
Often I missed her as she moved
Amidst green, gold, and brown.

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