Tiku akp

A Country Girl In Love - Poem by Tiku akp

You don’t have to go to the dale
To find her playing with a butterfly;
She would hide from you
As she is young and shy;

You can’t see her among trees and bushes
For she does not stay in a place;
Just track down her in fields
On her head she has done a new lace;

She may be on the hill, sitting on stone
And staring at the sky in a pensive mood;
She has been going there to watch
The flitting clouds since her childhood;

Yonder at the edge of dale you can see
Her squatting by the river side playing;
With sands, snails and pebbles
Watching the boats as they go down gliding;

Sometimes I watch her lithely tread
The narrow paths across the desolate field;
Her eyes looking for someone
Where the green crops wild flowers yield;

She is lost in herself and wanders through
Vales, forests, hills and hot desert;
Singing, dancing, laughing and murmuring
No one knows what is in her heart;

Sometimes they think she has met
Someone somewhere in those lonely lands;
Who fell in love with her and promised
To return and would ask her for her hands;

Comments about A Country Girl In Love by Tiku akp

  • Rookie - 324 Points Red (3/5/2015 12:29:00 AM)

    I love this so much, evokes the inner world of a dreamer so well with the language adds texture and detail that brings the vivid scene to life. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 26,979 Points Chinedu Dike (12/24/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    A lovely piece with good rhymes. It's a lovely narrative poem well penned. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,884 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/26/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    A sweet poem with great rhythm and spontaneous and flowery flow of words. Excellent work my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,884 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/26/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    A sweet poem with great rhythm and spontaneous and flowery flow of words. Excellent work my friend.

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  • Rookie - 52 Points Princess Lilypad (8/31/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    Very descriptive, put me right in front of her. you are a very good writer. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,778 Points Dave Walker (7/21/2013 2:28:00 AM)

    A great poem. Like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 23 Points Ketan Hukare (7/21/2013 1:56:00 AM)

    I like your poem very much indeed! ! ! ! ! ! !
    I am impressed...... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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