Tiku akp

A Country Girl In Love - Poem by Tiku akp

You don’t have to go to the dale
To find her playing with a butterfly;
She would hide from you
As she is young and shy;

You can’t see her among trees and bushes
For she does not stay in a place;
Just track down her in fields
On her head she has done a new lace;

She may be on the hill, sitting on stone
And staring at the sky in a pensive mood;
She has been going there to watch
The flitting clouds since her childhood;

Yonder at the edge of dale you can see
Her squatting by the river side playing;
With sands, snails and pebbles
Watching the boats as they go down gliding;

Sometimes I watch her lithely tread
The narrow paths across the desolate field;
Her eyes looking for someone
Where the green crops wild flowers yield;

She is lost in herself and wanders through
Vales, forests, hills and hot desert;
Singing, dancing, laughing and murmuring
No one knows what is in her heart;

Sometimes they think she has met
Someone somewhere in those lonely lands;
Who fell in love with her and promised
To return and would ask her for her hands;

Comments about A Country Girl In Love by Tiku akp

  • Bronze Star - 2,121 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (11/27/2015 3:41:00 PM)

    Beautiful write by ingenuity through imagery and metaphors, yet compelling to emote...10++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 47,517 Points Edward Kofi Louis (10/13/2015 3:33:00 AM)

    She is young and shy! But, very beautiful. Nice work. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Pratisha Karki (10/9/2015 4:53:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem, I wish I was that girl and was written for me. I wanted to read it again and again and again........ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,422 Points Seema Jayaraman (9/30/2015 11:44:00 AM)

    lovely poem..i can almost see myself as that wandering searching girl..thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 24,593 Points Liza Sud Russia (9/24/2015 10:02:00 AM)

    Nice to look at a girl - just to look, writ a verse and be happy! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,173 Points Akhtar Jawad (8/2/2015 10:40:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem, well wrote Tiku.............................10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,260 Points Bharati Nayak (7/6/2015 11:56:00 AM)

    A dreamy romantic poem around a simple, innocent, young beautiful village girl- - -awesome poem with nice flow of words.- - -Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,329 Points Geeta Radhakrishna Menon (6/24/2015 11:50:00 AM)

    I have been wanting to read your poems. After a search, when i was almost giving up, i found your poems.
    Was quite surprised and delighted to know you have written almost 300 poems. That's great! ! Congratulations!
    'A country girl in love' - the hopes and aspirations of the young girl wandering along the hills, valleys, forests, yet dancing and singing in tune with nature is beautifully brought out. Really enjoyed the poem, Tiku! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,660 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (6/17/2015 5:16:00 AM)

    Men tend to romanticize life in a village; but things are not so simple. Their need to fulfill basic needs sometimes drives them away from their homes into crowded cities. But it's a lovely poem. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 296 Points Suelynn Walters (6/12/2015 4:30:00 PM)

    Beautiful And very touching. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 47,517 Points Edward Kofi Louis (6/5/2015 3:20:00 PM)

    To find her. With the muse of love and nature. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,744 Points Cigeng Zhang (5/28/2015 9:41:00 PM)

    A very lovely work.A girl in love is like a butterfly...but who will catch her heart... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,123 Points Mihaela Pirjol (5/28/2015 1:00:00 PM)

    This is really touchy and beautiful...stunning imagery blended with emotions....I very much enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 324 Points Red (3/5/2015 12:29:00 AM)

    I love this so much, evokes the inner world of a dreamer so well with the language adds texture and detail that brings the vivid scene to life. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,039 Points Chinedu Dike (12/24/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    A lovely piece with good rhymes. It's a lovely narrative poem well penned. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MZANSI AND THE BALLOT BOX. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,971 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/26/2014 9:48:00 AM)

    A sweet poem with great rhythm and spontaneous and flowery flow of words. Excellent work my friend. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,971 Points Rajesh Thankappan (2/26/2014 9:47:00 AM)

    A sweet poem with great rhythm and spontaneous and flowery flow of words. Excellent work my friend.

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  • Rookie - 52 Points Princess Lilypad (8/31/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    Very descriptive, put me right in front of her. you are a very good writer. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,128 Points Dave Walker (7/21/2013 2:28:00 AM)

    A great poem. Like it, a great write. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Ketan Hukare (7/21/2013 1:56:00 AM)

    I like your poem very much indeed! ! ! ! ! ! !
    I am impressed...... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 21, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, July 22, 2013

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