Tiku akp

Here I'M Alone - Poem by Tiku akp

I don’t know why I like to talk with you
In your language
Why I can’t withdraw my fingers from the keys
Till I finished the page

Why do I always fall prey to your childlike charm
And believe your words
When I see you staring at me from inside the glass
My thoughts collapse as a tower of cards

The scratch you left on the surface of my heart
Has grown wide to touch the mind
Your lies and betrayal still haunt me like ghosts
Though much I try to leave them behind

Your questions have no answers with me
And you ask them so often
I tried and failed to come out from web of love
That around me you have spun

Know I well I won’t ever get you, and your love
Is not in my fate
You better find love with someone who stays near you
Before it would be too late

Comments about Here I'M Alone by Tiku akp

  • Rookie - 293 Points Suelynn Walters (6/11/2015 7:48:00 AM)

    Well Written. Very detailed.😊 (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 23,119 Points Edward Kofi Louis (6/5/2015 3:20:00 PM)

    In your language. With the muse of communication. Nice work.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 219 Points Rose Lu (8/25/2014 8:16:00 PM)

    Very nice work! I like it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 492 Points Ruby Mostazir (5/14/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    beautiful heart touching poem........
    really like dis! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (5/9/2013 11:25:00 PM)

    Very nicely penned. Every line touched me, as I am too alone now adays (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samantha Boatwood (5/5/2012 5:40:00 AM)

    I really like this poem, it has a lot of heart and feeling
    This poem captivated me.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 62 Points Pooja Karnani (4/17/2012 7:59:00 AM)

    NICE...ESPECIALLY..THE TITLE..! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,720 Points Neela Nath (4/11/2012 10:39:00 AM)

    Very painful situation! You can not leave your love and at the same time you have to stay alone..Great job! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 50 Points Mary Pagdati (3/24/2012 2:59:00 PM)

    A very sentimental poem Tiku - straight from the heart! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Christina Phan (3/20/2012 11:26:00 AM)

    Wow so depressing and I love your emotions you put in this poem and you write the way you feel is what most people can do, but write style is different. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ekaterina M. Polischuk (2/19/2012 12:53:00 PM)

    sad poem.... i don`t like to be lonely....and don`t like when other people are lonely, when they keep the pain in their hearts... all your poems are quite interesting for me, they have a deep meaning and it is the most pleasent. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Salma Torrez (11/13/2011 10:59:00 PM)

    The scratch you left on the surface of my heart
    Has grown wide to touch the mind 10 +++++++++++++++++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Lily Law (11/11/2011 5:44:00 PM)

    a very vivid writing! nice work.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Misty Tumlinson (11/10/2011 12:08:00 PM)

    this is really nice.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Sanu Puthupallil (10/8/2011 11:23:00 AM)

    nice poem...you showed the real emotions (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, September 14, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, September 14, 2011

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