Tiku akp

Good Morning - Poem by Tiku akp

I open the door and feel the dawn
Descending upon my palm as I hurry
To have a walk across the lawn

I open the window and feel the cold
Through my body; it makes me shiver
As to the unfolding bud I behold

I open the door and breathe the air
Fragrance from foliages enter into me
Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair

I open the window and stoop a little
The worm has wriggled out its hole and crawled
Crushing the dews that are soft and brittle

I open the door to welcome the ray
That has come down from heaven
Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray

I open the window to watch the hill
The halo of light hovers over its head
Like a sage in deep penance it is sitting still

I open the doors and windows and say
A prayer in His glory who created this all
Before I would get lost in my works for the day

Comments about Good Morning by Tiku akp

  • Rosie Bourget Rosie Bourget (12/30/2015 3:10:00 PM)

    You have an excellent writing style that inspire others to develop their own distinctive styles. Keep it up. (Report) Reply

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  • Paul Sebastian Paul Sebastian (11/29/2015 9:30:00 AM)

    What a beautiful way to greet the the morning, as if it is the first morning! Great expression and allusion.
    Thank you. I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal Mohammed Asim Nehal (10/17/2015 10:04:00 AM)

    Superb poem, very thoughtfully written. Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Savita Tyagi (9/5/2015 10:21:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. It is all His glory. blessed is the day when we open our hearts to appreciate it in an unhurried moment. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Abdulrazak Aralimatti Abdulrazak Aralimatti (8/20/2015 2:16:00 AM)

    A good write.
    A good depiction of a morning (Report) Reply

  • Suelynn Walters Suelynn Walters (6/9/2015 6:42:00 PM)

    Brilliant I like this so much :) (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak Bharati Nayak (5/27/2015 11:11:00 AM)

    Opening the door for the beauties of nature and singing His glory, this poem is a marvelous write.Loved every line of this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Monica Rupazo Monica Rupazo (12/17/2013 12:20:00 AM)

    I like it, good morning indeed. Wonderful poem excellent ] (Report) Reply

  • Olga Ogradyuk Olga Ogradyuk (12/11/2013 2:57:00 PM)

    I began to feel like I was very close to nature here, in the heart of a big city. (Report) Reply

  • Yasmeen Khan Yasmeen Khan (10/30/2013 2:01:00 PM)

    A cheery and bright poem like a sunny morning in winter warming the hearts! (Report) Reply

  • Liliana ~el (10/27/2013 1:16:00 PM)

    Very nice (Report) Reply

  • Queeny Gona Queeny Gona (10/17/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    Every single element in nature depicts the mighty power and wonders of the Creator! And this reminds us to be thankful to GOD for blessing us with such beautiful things in nature! (Report) Reply

  • Aftab Alam Khursheed Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/9/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    Good morning is really the depiction of morning thank (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (10/6/2013 11:23:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem it depicts how grateful we should be about mother nature each day! (Report) Reply

  • Rajesh Thankappan Rajesh Thankappan (10/6/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem and fantastic write! Please find time to read my poem 'Ode to Shakespeare.' I look forward for hear from you. (Report) Reply

  • Harindhar Reddy (10/4/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    Wonderful way of opening the door for nature. Hats of to the poet! :) (Report) Reply

  • Abhishek Mishra (9/27/2013 10:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem...enjoyed reading it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Zandile Wardle Zandile Wardle (9/25/2013 4:07:00 AM)

    i like i like...refreshing thoughts, it all feels real (Report) Reply

  • Lorraine Colon (9/24/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    What a wonderful way to start the day. Like a sage in deep penance it is sitting still - what beautiful words! (Report) Reply

  • Inas Essa Inas Essa (9/24/2013 3:09:00 PM)

    I open the door to welcome the ray
    That has come down from heaven
    Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray

    so touching words, love it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013

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