Tiku akp

Good Morning - Poem by Tiku akp

I open the door and feel the dawn
Descending upon my palm as I hurry
To have a walk across the lawn

I open the window and feel the cold
Through my body; it makes me shiver
As to the unfolding bud I behold

I open the door and breathe the air
Fragrance from foliages enter into me
Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair

I open the window and stoop a little
The worm has wriggled out its hole and crawled
Crushing the dews that are soft and brittle

I open the door to welcome the ray
That has come down from heaven
Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray

I open the window to watch the hill
The halo of light hovers over its head
Like a sage in deep penance it is sitting still

I open the doors and windows and say
A prayer in His glory who created this all
Before I would get lost in my works for the day

Comments about Good Morning by Tiku akp

  • Gold Star - 12,386 Points Abdulrazak Aralimatti (8/20/2015 2:16:00 AM)

    A good write.
    A good depiction of a morning (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 293 Points Suelynn Walters (6/9/2015 6:42:00 PM)

    Brilliant I like this so much :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,578 Points Bharati Nayak (5/27/2015 11:11:00 AM)

    Opening the door for the beauties of nature and singing His glory, this poem is a marvelous write.Loved every line of this beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Monica Rupazo (12/17/2013 12:20:00 AM)

    I like it, good morning indeed. Wonderful poem excellent ] (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Olga Ogradyuk (12/11/2013 2:57:00 PM)

    I began to feel like I was very close to nature here, in the heart of a big city. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 973 Points Yasmeen Khan (10/30/2013 2:01:00 PM)

    A cheery and bright poem like a sunny morning in winter warming the hearts! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 867 Points Liliana ~el (10/27/2013 1:16:00 PM)

    Very nice (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,030 Points Queeny Gona (10/17/2013 5:47:00 AM)

    Every single element in nature depicts the mighty power and wonders of the Creator! And this reminds us to be thankful to GOD for blessing us with such beautiful things in nature! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 39,822 Points Aftab Alam Khursheed (10/9/2013 12:20:00 PM)

    Good morning is really the depiction of morning thank (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points marvin brato (10/6/2013 11:23:00 PM)

    Wonderful poem it depicts how grateful we should be about mother nature each day! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,556 Points Rajesh Thankappan (10/6/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem and fantastic write! Please find time to read my poem 'Ode to Shakespeare.' I look forward for hear from you. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 835 Points Harindhar Reddy (10/4/2013 8:28:00 AM)

    Wonderful way of opening the door for nature. Hats of to the poet! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 18 Points Abhishek Mishra (9/27/2013 10:28:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem...enjoyed reading it: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 109 Points Zandile Wardle (9/25/2013 4:07:00 AM)

    i like i like...refreshing thoughts, it all feels real (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,430 Points Lorraine Colon (9/24/2013 6:37:00 PM)

    What a wonderful way to start the day. Like a sage in deep penance it is sitting still - what beautiful words! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Inas Essa (9/24/2013 3:09:00 PM)

    I open the door to welcome the ray
    That has come down from heaven
    Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray

    so touching words, love it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,063 Points Neela Nath Das (9/22/2013 11:34:00 AM)

    I always love the rhythm that dances along.......It's the cream of your write.10 of course. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,259 Points Geetha Jayakumar (9/22/2013 1:30:00 AM)

    Good Morning to you!
    Beautiful poem, giving all the freshness of the day, morning...
    Loved reading it.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013

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