Good Morning Poem by Anil Kumar Panda

Good Morning

Rating: 5.0


I open the door and feel the dawn
Descending upon my palm as I hurry
To have a walk across the lawn

I open the window and feel the cold
Through my body; it makes me shiver
As to the unfolding bud I behold

I open the door and breathe the air
Fragrance from foliages enter into me
Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair

I open the window and stoop a little
The worm has wriggled out its hole and crawled
Crushing the dews that are soft and brittle

I open the door to welcome the ray
That has come down from heaven
Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray

I open the window to watch the hill
The halo of light hovers over its head
Like a sage in deep penance it is sitting still

I open the doors and windows and say
A prayer in His glory who created this all
Before I would get lost in my works for the day

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb Plumb 15 February 2019

We open the door to a new working day? Interesting write. Regards. Sally

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 September 2019

Thanks for giving your valuable time. My regards.

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Soran M. H 08 February 2020

I open the door to welcome the ray That has come down from heaven Piercing the clouds of colours- silver and gray how wonderful this nice piece of work it is? a precious poem written by professional poet, very good.. it deserves 10/10 always

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Sylvia Frances Chan 08 February 2022

Very subtile and finest poem from a good heart,5 Stars full on TOP, Anil Sir, though time has elapsed, your poems remain and become immortal, love is immortal

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Anil Kumar Panda 08 February 2022

That is a great compliment. Honored. Regards.

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Indira Renganathan 21 June 2021

Nice depiction of Aurora at dawn...last stanza is the highlight...5*****

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 October 2020

I open the door and breathe the air Fragrance from foliages enter into me Flowers swing in breeze with beauty and flair I open the door to welcome the morning rays. in india you enjoy it since it is on eqator. but we who are far away suffer when cold dark, mornings greet us. thank you dear Tiku. You are blessed to enjoy all this. tony

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 18 September 2020

Your beautiful poem shows the importance of taking the time to savor the wonders the Lord has wrought.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 25 March 2020

Such a lovely poem Dear Sir! Beautiful imagery, an ideal day; beautiful sceneries and starts with prays and the diurnal course. The refrain, " I open the window.., " comes out with beautiful and spelly pictures. I really loved reading the poem. It's not 'Good Morning', it's great morning.

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 March 2020

Thanks very much my friend for your precious comment. My gratitude.

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