Y// White As Snow Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y// White As Snow

Rating: 5.0


a beautiful smile
on a disabled boy's face
teeth white as snow
full of warmth, melting my heart
with unconditional love

Sunday, September 11, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: disability,love,smile
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This afternoon in Pasir Putih, Kelantan.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 23 September 2016

Such a heart felt write here..the emotion pours out of your words... Annette

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Hans Vr 23 September 2016

Many thanks, Annette, for the lovely comment

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Mihaela Pirjol 22 September 2016

This is a well-constructed tanka; images as: innocence, joy of life, purity of spirit, are artistically blended within it. Love it.

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Hans Vr 23 September 2016

Many thanks Mihaela. A wonderful comment.

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Valsa George 12 September 2016

An innocent smile on a disabled boy's face gives us the message that one can be happy despite all deficiencies and deformities of the body....! True happiness comes from inside and it doesn't have much to do with physical perfection, but on attitude and perceptions on life!

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Hans Vr 12 September 2016

Many thanks Valsa for the wonderful comment. You really got the whole message of the poem. It was truly a pleasure to read this comment.

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