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Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,199 Points (18 October 1964)

Y..... The Biggest Freedom


I pray for love
We are all bathing in it
We just have to open our hearts,
to open our minds
And let it in

The biggest freedom is ours
To let it in or lock it out

I pray for hope
We are swimming in it
We just have to open our hearts
to open our souls
And let it in

The biggest freedom is ours
To let it in or lock it out

I pray for wisdom,
We are soaking in it
We just have to open
To open our minds
And let it in

The biggest freedom is ours
To let it in or lock it out

I pray for spirit
We are swimming in it
Let our selves drown in the huge love
the huge wisdom and spirit
that is around us all time

Aufie Zophy, Bachok





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Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2012
Edited: Sunday, April 28, 2013

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  • Gold Star - 10,028 Points Chinedu Dike (9/23/2014 9:52:00 PM)

    Indeed, it is within our discretion to chose bliss or not. A poem with a powerful message. Thanks for sharing. Please have a look at my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dea Dear (5/3/2014 3:48:00 PM)

    i have a notice writing here hoping it could be useful, , , this line, , , , i pray for spirit it must has been so i pray for my creator because praying must be only for him (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 920 Points Elena Sandu (10/19/2012 5:35:00 AM)

    Your poem brilliantly shines, yes everything is around us we only need to keep hearts open, how true! Thank you, wish I could give a hundred tens, great poem, I should have it on my faves, thank you for share. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Rekha Mandagere (10/1/2012 8:55:00 AM)

    If we are free from locking our souls within then surely it leads us to the great path of wisdom. i love the clarity and the presentation technique used here. I must give a 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Eindaray Kyaw (9/15/2012 4:03:00 AM)

    a wave of satisfaction comes over my mind while I am reading this poem
    The biggest freedom...really great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 116 Points Joseph Anderson (9/2/2012 1:01:00 PM)

    Wise and sage advice, Written with emotional empact. There is much to think on here.
    Indeed, a worthwhile write (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 2,442 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (9/2/2012 12:33:00 AM)

    We are still free to think and no one knows about it! Is it possible to read our mind through some programs? May be possible, then we will lose our freedom! Your poem talks about the freedom to love unconditionally! Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 660 Points Unwritten Soul (8/31/2012 10:11:00 PM)

    The biggest freedom soaked me in after reading your poem, its a lovely poem and calm the sea from the heavy storm....nice voice Hans_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Ellias Aghili (8/31/2012 12:28:00 PM)

    This is obviously great. the meaning is clear and enjoyable,
    Totally fantastic and nice.
    good job dear. (Report) Reply

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