Y.. Reality Poem by Aufie Zophy

Y.. Reality

Rating: 5.0


Reality
Is dark and gloomy
But I see so much light

Reality
Is negative and bad
But I see so much goodness

Reality
Is falsehood and deceit
But I see so much honesty

Reality
is ugly and hideous
But I see so much beauty

Reality may be changing slowly
Please try to see
Take a look together with me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Smoky Hoss 20 October 2011

The light of life has opened the writers eyes to see beyond what appears to be the bad end, to show the true reality. Very enjoyable poem.

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Vipins Puthooran 29 September 2011

Reality, a real poem... Fantastic, written well. So optimistic with a positive energy.

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Shadow Girl 27 September 2011

Great, interesting, good structure..meaningful and optomistic..i like it! -SG

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Unwritten Soul 27 September 2011

Reality, actually having two things in one...The object and the shadow, i guess if we see positiveness someone see it's shadow of negativeness...that pessimistic it's about pro and cons... but the successful person will look even negative things, shadowed by positive meaning, good to be optimistic...Life and reality is about how we see and interpret it.. and you have Optimistic mind, such a good one :) _Unwritten SOul

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