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Aufie Zophy

Freshman - 1,549 Points (18 October 1964)

Y/ Paradise


Our world 'd be an amazing paradise
If we would just be always kind and wise
But all too often we cannot bother,
and then we're starting to hate each other
and in this way we surely jeopardise
our fabulous wonderful paradise



Bachok,9 June 2013
Aufie Zophy

Submitted: Saturday, June 08, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 31, 2013

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Inspired by a song from
the late Dutch artist Toon Hermans

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  • Rookie - 138 Points Spiritual Seeker (7/11/2013 1:00:00 AM)

    Yes, it starts from the heart.....to some, even a humble abode is paradise! To others, a palace a prison. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,460 Points Ramesh Rai (6/20/2013 11:27:00 PM)

    best write. we the poets are trying to make it parsdise n o hope it wil not go invain. thnx for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 92 Points Yasmeen Khan (6/15/2013 8:04:00 AM)

    A message of kindness and compassion, if we practise the world would be a paradise like Eden above. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,095 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (6/13/2013 9:31:00 AM)

    Yeah d aggressive n d haters of mankind do turn dis world into hell. Lets pray d goodly ones increase as hoped for by yor super gr8 poem! And tnx 4 yor words on me poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 812 Points Unwritten Soul (6/10/2013 5:34:00 AM)

    Ethereal to live here as paradise, but great to try...and it never wrong to do....Paradise on earth is can be here when hearts of people be the stars that shine love and its magical beat to unify all livings and souls as one body_Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 321 Points Captain Cur (6/9/2013 9:43:00 AM)

    Nice straightforward write of what it will take
    to get rid of hate and live in paradise. But as
    you say we do not bother to take the time,
    hence I agree, will lead to our demise. (Report) Reply

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