Robert Murray Smith

Gold Star - 146,361 Points (17.03.1943 / Wellington)

When Are You Coming Back - Poem by Robert Murray Smith

When are you coming back I'm so lonely
Staring at the ceiling feeling so lost
When are you coming back I'm so lonely
Staring at the ceiling feeling so lost

If you tell me soon I will sing a tune
About dancing on the wall if I don't fall
If you tell me soon I will sing a tune
About dancing on the wall if I don't fall

Call me soon or I will be out of a tune
I'm making noises like a dog
Call me soon or I will be out of a tune
I'm making noises like a dog

- -repeat twice

Topic(s) of this poem: song


Comments about When Are You Coming Back by Robert Murray Smith

  • Rini Shibu (5/19/2017 4:16:00 AM)


    Longing for someone is the sign of true love...lovely poem..++10 (Report) Reply

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  • (5/19/2017 3:08:00 AM)


    What a lovely song. Beautiful rhythm, nice flow. I love the repetition. It's very melodious. Missing someone can be really hard. A huge 10. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, May 19, 2017



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