Waterfall Poem by Valerie Dohren
Waterfall
Raging, crashing torrents
splashing over rocks,
bubbling, foaming,
gushing down into the ravine
spurting upwards
Water spraying into the air -
- turning to tears trickling down cheeks
face melting - drowning.
A fine write in surrealism form (visually) set down by the latter section.. Your words create flamboyant strong movements of water, falling to a trickle of pain.. Bravo.. Karen
From this fine piece it is easy to see the age old comparison betweens sadness and tears and waterfalls. A succinct poem with delicate emotions and raging landscapes.
A rich river of reflection that emits emotions that empties the eyes of tears. Wonderfully worded my friend!
Waterfalls do tend to ellicit powerful yet melancholic emotions. You captured that feeling in this poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/10/2024 6:33:55 PM # 1.0.0.1119
I was up and then brought crashing down by this poem Val, good work though.