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(13 January 1947 / Southport)

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Watching

Watching in the mellowed light
Through the darkness, through the night
Eyes that pierce and eyes that burn
Eyes that twist and eyes that turn

Watching every move you make
Every single breath you take
Are they there to steal your soul
Glistening, and black as coal

Do they claw into your heart
Ripping every thought apart
Haunting yet your quiet mind
Do you heed them, are you blind

Can you see them, do you hide
Shall you mock them, shall you chide
Are your own eyes ….. open wide

Submitted: Wednesday, April 17, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 02, 2013


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The devil within.....

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  • * Sunprincess * (4/8/2014 8:17:00 AM)

    ........eyes are the most beautiful part of a human....some people's eyes seem to be mysterious, as my cousin has eyes of different colors...one is green and one is blue...wish mine was mysterious as hers....love this piece...

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (5/9/2013 2:34:00 AM)

    Brilliant! Another super piece of writing.

  • Spiritual Seeker (4/30/2013 5:13:00 PM)

    Love reading it again and again, imagination....Lurking shadows

  • Hans Vr (4/30/2013 9:03:00 AM)

    As I read the poem, I was forming my own interpretation, which virtually collapsed when I read the notes.
    I tend to agree with thee uneasy magnetic feelings of Theodora and Hari and experienced something like that myself. Still the images linger in my mind. Very interesting poem

  • Chandra Thiagarajan (4/29/2013 3:24:00 AM)

    The devil within lurking and watching has been excellently brought out! Lovely, Valerie!

  • Shahzia Batool (4/29/2013 2:38:00 AM)

    The devil within has a strong presence, he works even one's eyes are opened wide...the beats are perfect...your poems are the best stuff for loud recital! ! !

  • Unwritten Soul (4/28/2013 3:08:00 AM)

    The title is the simplest one compared to others of yours, but the whole poem is still huge and so beautiful, and it set the title again as the door before a poem reading..lovely! and true_Soul

  • Theodora Onken (4/28/2013 2:26:00 AM)

    Haunting, lurking type of poetr at its best Valerie. More please!

  • ..... W@king Up..... (4/26/2013 6:54:00 PM)

    The devil catches us unawares... Nice write.

  • Juan Olivarez (4/26/2013 1:13:00 PM)

    Oh my. The master at work. Valerie you are indeed a wonderful poet.

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