A Dream Poem by Valerie Dohren
A Dream
Today I slipped into a dream
And saw a better world
A world of peace and gentleness
Before my eyes unfurled
And in my fantasy beheld
A vision of mankind
All set beneath a bow of fire
In glory full enshrined
His voice was singing so in tune
With all that was around
That such a heav`nly melody
Did o`er the earth resound
And all the hands that owned contempt
Were clasped together tight
To form a ring of unity -
`Twas such a splendid sight
Then all the eyes that never saw
How wondrous life could be
So glinted through the bow of fire -
It surely dazzled me
For all humanity became
As just one beating heart
Together joined in harmony
Thus no more set apart
At night he gazed upon the stars
By day towards the sun
To mingle with the fruitful earth
With all he was at one
Then all the trees bowed down in awe
All creatures danced and played
All flowers spread their petals wide
As `neath the sun they swayed
(But this was just a wistful dream
One that may never be
A vision in a saddened heart -
`Twas just a fantasy)
Today I slipped into a dream
And saw a better world
Where sixteen billion gemstones flashed
Which in her hair were purled
Very nicely weaved. wish you the best Udaya. See my poetry and comment
Am amazing dream Valerie, you have so much feeling. This time of year too is meant to be the happiest yet really... it is probably the saddest. Thank You x
A magnificent Dream which made me really emotional. The lines For all humanity became As just one beating heart Together joined in harmony Thus no more to set apart are such golden words which sing a symphony in my ears and are ever echoing! A fantastic noble dream-I wish with all my heart it turns true!
A world of peace and gentleness comes before your eyes in dream and turns into paradise of reality. Each of us should see such dream to motivate lives in reality of peaceful and lovable world. All creatures dance and play here. All flowers bloom beautifully. Nature is graceful. An excellent dream poem is nicely penned...10
I love the flow of the beautiful narrative poem. A subtly penned and nicely encapsulated train of thoughts depicting the unveiling of Paradise on the occasion of Coming Of The Lord. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.
Beautiful dream poem shared on. Nice way of seeing better world. Excellent job done and shared on. Excellent work.
It is impossible to fully comprehend the extent of the elegance of your pen... so many facets...such beauty, such grace and poise... I bow to you dear poet... in awe.
This is really beautiful... thats the kind of poems that you are searching for reading....liked it
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Just purely beautiful... im so glad i picked another one of yours to read as i needed cheering up......ty so much karen