Seething cauldron, an inferno
belching noxious vapours
spewing red hot molten lava
spilling down mountainside
to drown the land in sulphurated destruction
Rocks hurtling through the air,
falling everywhere -
- turning into words pouring from lips
burning - destroying
Waterfall and Volcano two straight to the point poems. I like the way you write.
Very true! unkind words can burn like the sulphrous lava from a volcano!
Your way of morphing natural occurences into human emotions is excellent. Stunning even.
nice, i liked it...i will def check out a few more. i am new to the site, but i like what i see so far
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great poem again Val :)